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Excessively Curated Page

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For such a prominent federal position this bio is excessively brief and uninformative about the person. Lets build this out? 2601:185:8280:2240:BF27:B72A:F9AF:2E36 (talk) 18:32, 17 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

I agree. Just added a small paragraph with reliable sources (RS) regarding the bipartisan calls for Cheatle to resign. It is written in a very neutral tone. Let's see how long it lasts.
2601:19E:427E:5BB0:6CF6:51A:9F1F:8524 (talk) 16:12, 21 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

Roof expert

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Lack of information.

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Normally in a Wikipedia article about someone, there is a section saying whether they are married, if they have children, what religion (if any) they follow, and so on. This article seems to have no such information - the article appears to be very incomplete. There are all sorts of stories going around - it would be good if the article set out factual information about this person, doing so would reduce speculation and wild stories. 2A02:C7C:E183:AC00:AD9B:AB0F:E8F6:47B7 (talk) 06:49, 18 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

Where exactly has there been speculation about her children, marriage or religion? Trade (talk) 23:40, 22 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
Not even a date of birth. 50.32.134.104 (talk) 17:08, 12 July 2025 (UTC)Reply

Fix citation [9]

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Citation number 9 references "Security Magazine". It appears this was citing https://www.securitymagazine.com/articles/97889-women-in-security-2022-kimberly-cheatle-pepsico, but for some reason something broke it 174.61.187.77 (talk) 20:15, 18 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

 Already done This citation was added at some point since the request was opened. Jamedeus (talk) 00:46, 24 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

Tense change - please fix

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Currently reads: "From 2019 to 2022, Cheatle served as senior director of global security at PepsiCo, where she was responsible for directing and implementing security protocols for the company's facilities in North America. Her role involves developing risk management assessment and risk mitigation."

I think that should be "her role involved", past tense.2604:3D09:C77:4E00:291C:DD7E:431E:B719 (talk) 23:55, 18 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

The sentence in question has since been removed outright by another editor. Left guide (talk) 00:23, 23 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

Calls to resign

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She has faced calls to resign, be fired, or be taken into custody for questioning about complicity in murder 2603:9001:5D00:2608:9540:1657:BB53:310A (talk) 22:34, 22 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

The calls for her resignation are already in the article. "Taken into custody"? Do you have a reliable source for that? Joyous! Noise! 22:43, 22 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
Yes the commments of this video:
https://www.youtube.com/live/t4Qi7pfBxzQ?si=RKOgMxr5fncVuHS4 2603:9001:5D00:2608:9540:1657:BB53:310A (talk) 23:06, 22 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
Something like a news article would be a far better source Trade (talk) 23:40, 22 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
I would love to see a reliable source saying she's facing calls to "be taken into custody for questioning about complicity in murder."
Every reliable source I've read is simply reporting that she's facing calls to resign. Hella say hella (talk) 00:45, 23 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
This sounds like something Marjorie Taylor Greene would say tbh. Trade (talk) 00:57, 23 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

Repeating of "the most significant operational failure at the Secret Service in decades"

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"she acknowledged it was 'the most significant operational failure at the Secret Service in decades'" seems repeated on July 13, 2024 and on July 22, 2024, if this is not an error maybe on the 2nd date it could be rephrased to something like (not a native speaker so I'm sure it could be phrased better): "she reaffirmed/reiterated her earlier statement on July 13, 2024 that it was 'the most significant operational failure at the Secret Service in decades'" to avoid the risk of misinterpretation of the timeline? 79.138.18.89 (talk) 22:52, 22 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

Hm, after re-reading it I think it is actually the same event that is repeated twice, ie: it should probably be removed from the 1st paragraph relating to July 13th. 79.138.18.89 (talk) 22:57, 22 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
 Already done This was fixed here. Jamedeus (talk) 07:49, 23 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

Criminal intent

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Many Americans believe criminal intent was there which means she should not only resign or be fired but also be arrested and brought in for questioning 2603:9001:5D00:2608:9540:1657:BB53:310A (talk) 23:02, 22 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

This is already covered in Misinformation and conspiracy theories Trade (talk) 23:34, 22 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
Correct, a few Americans are calling for that, but it has no place in her article (this page). Hella say hella (talk) 00:49, 23 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

Presidential Rank Award

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Article says she was awarded Presidential Rank Award in 2021.This is an award for members of the Senior Executive Service. At that time she was with Pepsi, not in the Senior Executive Service. The timeline doesn't make sense. 173.93.50.80 (talk) 11:06, 23 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

 Not done: it's not clear what changes you want to be made. Please mention the specific changes in a "change X to Y" format and provide a reliable source if appropriate. This appears to be more of a matter for discussion, as it isn't clear what changes should be made, so I'm going to mark this edit request as answered until it's clear what should be changed in the article. --Ferien (talk) 00:08, 24 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
Pretty obvious he wants her receiving the Presidential Rank Award in 2021 removed from the article Trade (talk) 02:06, 24 July 2024 (UTC)Reply
 Not done: the information is sourced and easily attributable to multiple RS (including this one). M.Bitton (talk) 11:28, 24 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

now is OK to revert my edit

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https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Kimberly_Cheatle&diff=1235905795&oldid=1235887854 173.26.112.39 (talk) 16:15, 23 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

Discrepancy

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The first sentence is: she is born 1970/1971. The Template Short description is: American law enforcement officer (born 1972). Maximum one of them may be correct. --Mann aus 23 (talk) 19:15, 23 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

 Done It looks like the birth year in the article was changed but the short description wasn't changed accordingly. Thanks for noticing! --Ferien (talk) 00:06, 24 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

Semi-protected edit request on 23 July 2024

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Birthday: Change 1970/1971 to October 26, 1970 [1] Depaul225 (talk) 20:13, 23 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

References

Denied The website is not a reliable source per WP:BLPPRIMARY - " Do not use public records that include personal details, such as date of birth, home value, traffic citations, vehicle registrations, and home or business addresses". Yoshiman6464 ♫🥚 21:05, 23 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

Agreed; leaving it as "1970/71" is admirably vague. 50.32.134.104 (talk) 17:10, 12 July 2025 (UTC)Reply

The assertion Congress was laughing AT Cheatle is not supported by source

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Citation is intentionally vague and neutral in its description, saying “Laughter could be heard in the room.” Article here provides a clearly biased interpretation which is unsubstantiated in its framing. 2603:8000:E2F0:2DC0:C0F8:79FB:801B:3CF1 (talk) 13:34, 19 May 2025 (UTC)Reply

BBC is biased? Do tell. Your "side" lost this one. 50.32.134.104 (talk) 17:13, 12 July 2025 (UTC)Reply