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Talk:Joseph Berchtold

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Latest comment: 10 years ago by Kierzek in topic GA Review
Good articleJoseph Berchtold has been listed as one of the Warfare good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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August 9, 2015Good article nomineeListed
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This review is transcluded from Talk:Joseph Berchtold/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk · contribs) 14:43, 8 August 2015 (UTC)Reply

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  • Repeating the same citation over and over again next to each other is unnecessary Done
  • Section headers that are like "Career in the ..." could be rewritten as "... career" (suggestion only) Done
  • Second paragraph in lead should be split Done Kierzek (talk) 18:46, 9 August 2015 (UTC)Reply

Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 15:03, 8 August 2015 (UTC)Reply