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Talk:Jessica Tierney

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Latest comment: 7 years ago by M holleb in topic Miriam's Comments

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Your blurb at the top should be more focused on the present (the info about her early life should be moved to Early life and Education) you say "born" twice she is a renowned paleoclimatologist (not renounced) you don't need to say "paleoclimate" before field (redundant) change "organic" to "geochemical" change "works" to "papers"

in the section about her degrees - include more - who did she work with? what did she work on?

your infobox is in a funny space your picture isn't showing up you should include her website awards

research change: "Another type of biomarker used in Tierney's research is Tex86..." to: "Tierney also uses TEX86, a biomarker that tracks temperature, to study past climate in the tropics"

awards (delete [edit]) remove "selected to be a"

most cited publications include bibliographic info here

overall really nice job!

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Everything seems relevant and clear to me. Neutral and no bias. Good sources, all very relevant and notable. Maybe add a short section highlighting some of her publications in books and journals.  Preceding unsigned comment added by M holleb (talkcontribs) 19:04, 12 November 2018 (UTC)Reply