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Talk:Han Yu (pool player)/GA2

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Latest comment: 6 months ago by Canary757 in topic GA review

GA review

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Nominator: Lee Vilenski (talk · contribs) 23:07, 4 January 2026 (UTC)Reply

Reviewer: Canary757 (talk · contribs) 07:45, 6 January 2026 (UTC)Reply

Hi again. Regarding refs

  • 1&2 look the same
  • 22, 23 and 26 are dateless
  • 24, 25, 27 and 28 are missing a website name=
  • 22 and 23 also have the website name merged in with the title
  • Noting historic fail, primarily on broadness. Page word count has risen from 358 to 649 in that time and I'll look at the other concerns (list as prose) too.

Canary757 (talk) 07:45, 6 January 2026 (UTC)Reply

ps ref 3 is a bare url. Thanks. Canary757 (talk) 07:47, 6 January 2026 (UTC)Reply
These ref errors should be solved now. Lee Vilenski (talkcontribs) 21:01, 6 January 2026 (UTC)Reply
Thanks. To be honest, I think the issues flagged by the earlier reviewer I(LunaEatsTuna) in 2023 still remain. Although the article has been improved, the early life section is one sentence, the prose is still she played in the final of......and beat......... etc, and there is no personal life section. In the infobox it says she reached number one in the world but this is not discussed in the article. When did she achieve this? For a sustained period? Once, several times? I know from my own editing of sports BLP's that they can be results heavy but it's good to break it up, add context, more in depth detail of career defining results, notable comebacks etc. The article also jumps from 2019 to 2023 with nothing in between and there is a bit of a gap between 2016 and 2018 also.
I have some smaller suggestions too like there are two overlinks in the article - All Japan Championship and Liu Shasha. Her 2024 win in the Kamui mixed doubles is not included in title and achievements. Her win in the 2014 China Open has no score or opponent detail but in the next sentence her semi-final exit in a redlisted event is described in greater detail. Her 2016 China Open win looks like it needs a reference. I think her 2023 defeat in the World ten-ball final could be included also (rappler).
I know from editing pool articles that finding in depth coverage of players is a lot trickier than for say snooker players, and I don't think there is a huge amount of info to extract from sources already in the article. Let me know your thoughts. Canary757 (talk) 07:15, 7 January 2026 (UTC)Reply
I can't invent sourcing. If sources don't mention things about their personal life, which they don't seem to, I can't add such a section. We generally only cover such things if they are particularly notable anyway.
The WPA rankings are... a mess. is about all we have. I could probably find a source that says she was ranked number one, but that's about it. The rankings are a much less set in stone (and there's lots of competing ones for different tours). I'm happy to add something to say she was world number one, which is indeed helpful, but defining when and for how long is a lot more tricky.
We might not (yet) have an article for the Amway Cup, but it's a massive event.
I suspect that the gap between 2019 and 2023 is (as you might have guessed) COVID related, as China had a very lengthy quarantine. AZBilliards doesn't list her as playing a single event in between these dates, but without a source saying she was not playing due to COVID, I can't imply. There was a couple things (like the later stages of the 9-ball world title) that she did in 2017, so I can add that.
With pool, there's usually only a handful of news articles even for the whole of large events, so covering individual matches is quite unlikely. I'll make the changes above and have another sweep for colour in references. Lee Vilenski (talkcontribs) 08:21, 7 January 2026 (UTC)Reply
Hi, I realise that pool is poorly covered by the media. In my opinion, this article does need more colour to get through GA. This article on azbilliards covering the 2016 China Open describes Yu as the world number three coming from 58 behind to defeat the world number one. I would recommend looking for other match reports of her most notable victories/defeats and seeing how much descriptive expansion could take place within a reasonable scope. With regards to her being world number one, I accept that this isn't easy but it does feel like an important milestone in her career. This reference from pro 9 at least states that she was the number one when she played SVB so at least we can say she was number one at that moment. Bare URL alert at ref~22.
Canary757 (talk) 13:28, 7 January 2026 (UTC)Reply
Yeah, that's fair. I've added the piece that you mentioned, and I really have done a search for dates of her #1 status, and she definitely became number one first in 2013, following her nine-ball world title, however, the sources just say that she "now sits atop the pool world", which isn't descriptive enough. I'll add some pieces about where she was number one and see what colour I can find.Lee Vilenski (talkcontribs) 20:03, 7 January 2026 (UTC)Reply
So I've added a bit more. Found a really nice source (in Chinese) about her dad, and it's got some nice bits that I've added. It also corroborates her being world number one first in 2014, which I've also added.
I've added a few more bits, as well as two other Chinese sources that talk about her Chinese eight-ball (hayball) championship, which I've added some colour and one about her during the pandemic, which is cool. Lee Vilenski (talkcontribs) 22:06, 7 January 2026 (UTC)Reply
Oh, you may get a kick out of this poorly translated article, which calls pool 'fancy billiards' Lee Vilenski (talkcontribs) 22:09, 7 January 2026 (UTC)Reply
Hi, Good work with expanding the article, way more detail now, particularly on her early life and I am happy with the article depth now. At 999 words, the article has changed considerably since it first went through a GA review. A few other points.
  • Date of birth is different between infobox and prose
  • 2018 Heyball opponent name needs to be checked
  • 2018 WPA Women's World Heyball Championship, reaching the final. She led Lui Shiasa 13‍–‍5 in a race-to-18 racks match, but lost nine of the next eleven to only lead by one, but eventually won 18‍–‍14. Can you check the score please? the wikilink and the second reference seem to say 17–‍14?
  • I cannot get reference 3 to work (billiardsdigest)
  • Refs 27, 34 and 36 need a date
  • added access-datss
  • Refs 33 and 35 need work/website=
  • Ref 2 description has an incorrect pronoun
  • The mixed doubles win could go in the titles list at the bottom?
Article passes earwig check
No original research
Is neutral
No redlisted references and they are not primary to the subject
Thanks. Canary757 (talk) 09:06, 8 January 2026 (UTC)Reply
No drama. I'll get right on that. As it happens, with some really deep searching I found a source that talks about her getting married and being a mum (it was a bit confusing, because quite a few Chinese articles talk about her being a mum, then showing a picture of her with a dog).
I'll incorporate your fixes and add the bit about her personal life and I think we've really improved this article. :) Lee Vilenski (talkcontribs) 09:17, 8 January 2026 (UTC)Reply
I agree so passing now. All criteria met. It would be great to have an image one day. On the subject of images, the other article I'm involved in with this GARC (Talk:Katy Marchant/GA1) has hit an impasse over the image copyright status of one photo. If this is a speciality area for you and if you have a couple of spare minutes it would be great if you could have a look but no problem if not. Thanks. Canary757 (talk) 06:51, 9 January 2026 (UTC)Reply