Talk:Fannie Phelps Adams

Peer Review

Lead:

• Your lead is very strong. It outlines the importance of Adams, without getting into full detail before the article.
• Great first statement that outlines who she is. It is very brief and represents a great example of what a lead should be.

Content:

• I think you started out well. You don't have much information, but that is perfectly fine; sometimes you can't always find a ton of information.
• Your content is strong, and even with not a ton of information, it is very detailed and gives good information with who she is.
• Great start, but I can see that you're still waiting to find more information, and put more information in. Lacking information in subtitles, get that information in your article as soon as you get it.

Tone and Balance:

• Great job with your Tone and Balance! It is very balance and neutral and stayed away from being opinion based.
• Gave information well without it being opinionated and was just factual.

Sources and References:

• Great reference page, and great sources. They are all up to date and reliable.
• Great job sourcing in the lead. It shows professionalism and easy to look at the sources, and outer sources.
  • Continue that all the way through in the body articles as well! Your information isn't sourced in your body paragraphs, so make sure you do that throughout all of them!

Organization:

• Your article is very organized. Great with the subheadings, where you can organize all of your information.
• Everything seems grammatically correct. Just watch for run-on sentences. It can be a lot of information in one sentence, so break it up if you can.
• Great use of words, and vocabulary; sounds very professional with the word choices you used.

Images and Media:

• No images and media included.

Overall Impressions:

• I think you have a great start for what can be an amazing article. I can see you still have some word to do on it, with putting in some information. Definitely make sure you finish sourcing your whole article and watch for run-on sentences. Your content so far is great, along with your lead, and neutrality throughout all of it! Your lead is very strong and introduces Adams very well.

Jennac16 (talk) 16:12, 28 October 2025 (UTC)

Wiki Education assignment: WGST 112.J12

This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 1 June 2026 and 1 August 2026. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Youngideals (article contribs).

— Assignment last updated by TheEngineerHistorian (talk) 14:27, 8 June 2026 (UTC)