Talk:Eocarcharia
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A fact from Eocarcharia appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 7 July 2025 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
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| Eocarcharia has been listed as one of the Natural sciences good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: August 13, 2025. (Reviewed version). |
Someone please edit, I can't
[edit]There is plenty of literature available- more information needed Robot 0123456789 (talk) 01:07, 2 April 2023 (UTC)
- Why can't you edit it? FunkMonk (talk) 01:08, 2 April 2023 (UTC)
Did you know nomination
[edit]- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Rjjiii talk 06:02, 29 June 2025 (UTC)
- ... that despite its name being in reference to the dinosaur family Carcharodontosauridae, Eocarcharia may actually be a member of the family Spinosauridae?
- Reviewed:
AFH (talk) 18:32, 13 June 2025 (UTC).
- Starting review--Kevmin § 16:49, 14 June 2025 (UTC)
Article expansion new enough and long enough. Article well sourced, neutral in presentation, hook cited and confirmed to the source, citations are needed, per DYK rules, at the end of each fact bearing sentence used in the hook @Augustios Paleo and SlvrHwk:.--Kevmin § 15:38, 18 June 2025 (UTC)
- @Augustios Paleo, SlvrHwk, and Kevmin: The proposed hook does not strike me as interesting to a broad audience. I am certain that something more interesting can be produced from such a long article, and perhaps even this fact can be presented better. I think a chimeric origin hook would be excellent. Surtsicna (talk) 18:28, 23 June 2025 (UTC)
- @Augustios Paleo and SlvrHwk: its been over a week since I pointed out the reference problem with the article and nook, and now there is concern regarding the hook interestingness (which i think may be justified on being written to techinically), however there has been no participation here or indication of fixing the issues. I will fail this nomination at the end of the week if there is no changes.--Kevmin § 19:13, 24 June 2025 (UTC)
- @Kevmin: I am unfamiliar with this process and somewhat surprised the article is being nominated for DYK in the first place, so my apologies that the issues haven't been taken care of earlier. I agree that the proposed hook is not particularly impactful (for a general audience), at least in the way it is currently presented. The following might be more suitable, based on the same source included above:
- ... that the carnivorous Eocarcharia may be a chimaeric dinosaur, known from bones of at least two unrelated species mistakenly combined?
- I created an image for the page (reviewed and approved here, per WP:PALEO mandates) that helps to illustrate this point and could potentially be included in the DYK, formatted below:
- @Kevmin: I am unfamiliar with this process and somewhat surprised the article is being nominated for DYK in the first place, so my apologies that the issues haven't been taken care of earlier. I agree that the proposed hook is not particularly impactful (for a general audience), at least in the way it is currently presented. The following might be more suitable, based on the same source included above:
- 'Alt1... that the carnivorous Eocarcharia may be a chimaeric dinosaur, known from bones of two unrelated species (pictured) mistakenly combined?
- I have also updated the article to include a citation for this hook in the lead. Thank you for your comments, your input is appreciated. -SlvrHwk (talk) 01:44, 25 June 2025 (UTC)
- @SlvrHwk and Augustios Paleo:, the added citation does clean up that part, and the suggested alt hooks are more accessible already. What if we pipe Chimera (paleontology) to chimera so it flows a bit easier, and the second half could be reworded a bit to "..., its bones coming from two different dinosaur families?" or similar--Kevmin § 04:52, 25 June 2025 (UTC)
- @Kevmin: That works as well, I too think that the chimeric nature of the dinosaur should be the focus. Saying "..., its bones coming from two different dinosaur families?" works as that is basically the definition of a chimera in paleontology.
- @SlvrHwk, Augustios Paleo, and Surtsicna: does anyone object to Alt2"...that the carnivorous Eocarcharia (fossils illustrated) may be a "chimaera", its bones coming from two different dinosaur families?"--Kevmin § 02:40, 27 June 2025 (UTC)
- No objections from me. It sounds very good! Surtsicna (talk) 06:34, 27 June 2025 (UTC)
- @SlvrHwk, Augustios Paleo, and Surtsicna: does anyone object to Alt2"...that the carnivorous Eocarcharia (fossils illustrated) may be a "chimaera", its bones coming from two different dinosaur families?"--Kevmin § 02:40, 27 June 2025 (UTC)
- @Kevmin: That works as well, I too think that the chimeric nature of the dinosaur should be the focus. Saying "..., its bones coming from two different dinosaur families?" works as that is basically the definition of a chimera in paleontology.
- @SlvrHwk and Augustios Paleo:, the added citation does clean up that part, and the suggested alt hooks are more accessible already. What if we pipe Chimera (paleontology) to chimera so it flows a bit easier, and the second half could be reworded a bit to "..., its bones coming from two different dinosaur families?" or similar--Kevmin § 04:52, 25 June 2025 (UTC)
With the referencing and hook issues dealt with, I see no more problems with the nomination. Article expansion new enough and long enough. Article well sourced, neutral in presentation, hook cited and confirmed. Image main page complaint. Good to go.--Kevmin § 17:13, 27 June 2025 (UTC)
GA review
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Nominators: Augustios Paleo (talk · contribs) 03:17, 20 July 2025 (UTC), SlvrHwk (talk · contribs) 18:39, 9 August 2025 (UTC)
Reviewer: Simongraham (talk · contribs) 14:06, 9 August 2025 (UTC)
This looks like an interesting nomination and likely to be near to meeting the Good Article criteria already. I will start a full review shortly. simongraham (talk) 14:06, 9 August 2025 (UTC)
- Sounds good, thank you! AFH (talk) 18:09, 9 August 2025 (UTC)
- @AFH It is an honor. I will ping your co-nominator too. simongraham (talk) 23:13, 10 August 2025 (UTC)
Comments
[edit]- First, some general comments
- Overall, the standard of the article is high.
- It is of reasonable length, with 2,434 words of readable prose.
- The lead is appropriately long at 235 words.
- Authorship is 92.3% from the two nominators with contributions from 27 other editors.
- It is currently assessed as a B class article.
- There are some duplicate links, including abelisaurid, allosauroid, anterior, Ceratosuchops, Elrhaz Formation, metriacanthosaurid, posterior and Riparovenator.
- Although not a GA criteria, suggest adding ALT text to the images for accessibility.
Criteria
[edit]The six good article criteria:
- It is reasonable well written.
- the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct;
- The writing is clear and appropriate.
- Suggest it is worth adding an introduction to the section on classification.
- The uncertainty on the fossils, whether they are one taxa or even related to the same individuals seems to recur throughout the article. Is it worth combining these into one here?
- Is "uniquepostorbital" two words?
- I have not seen the word "robusticity" before. Is robustness a more common synonym?
- Suggest adding "the" to "part of skull that contains the brain".
- I believe it is "where" rather than "were" in "were it is typically broad".
- Suggest clarifying "lacks the ossification" at the end of the section on the skull,
- it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead, layout and word choice.
- The lead is good and clear and seems to the meet MOS:LEAD.
- Much of the jargon is explained well, but there are other phrases it would be good to explain. For example, please clarify "were not found in association", "figured a newly-discovered skull roof" and "may even be referrable to".
- Please revise "however" to ensure compliance with MOS:WTW.
- It seems to comply with the other Manuals of Style.
- the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct;
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- it contains a reference section, presented in accordance with the layout style guideline;
- A reference section is included, with sources listed.
- Please check the DOI for Cau, 2024.
- all inline citations are from reliable sources;
- Sources seems to be mainly peer-reviewed journals.
- Please confirm that the pages by Holtz, Sereno etc meet the requirements of WP:SPS.
- it contains no original research;
- All relevant statements have inline citations.
- Spot checks confirm 1, 5 and 14 are accurately represented.
- it contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism;
- Earwig gives a 7.4% chance of copyright violation, which means it is unlikely. The top article for overlap is the one by Cau and Paterna sourced in the document and is basically common phrases and titles.
- it contains a reference section, presented in accordance with the layout style guideline;
- It is broad in its coverage
- it addresses the main aspects of the topic.
- The article covers the main aspects well, including the discovery and the controversies that surround the genus.
- it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style).
- The article goes into a lot of detail but is generally compliant.
- it addresses the main aspects of the topic.
- It has a neutral point of view.
- it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to different points of view.
- The article offers a good balance, particularly in the section on the taxonomic classification uncertainty.
- it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to different points of view.
- It is stable.
- it does not change significantly from day to day because of any ongoing edit war or content dispute.
- There is no evidence of edit wars.
- it does not change significantly from day to day because of any ongoing edit war or content dispute.
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- images are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content;
- Giganotos Db.jpg has an appropriate PD tag.
- The other images have appropriate CC tags.
- images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions.
- The images are appropriate.
- Captions look clear and suitable.
- Eocarcharia, improved.png is tagged that it shows "Inaccurate foot anatomy". Is this correct?
- images are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content;
@Augustios Paleo:@SlvrHwk: Thank you for a very interesting and well-researched article. Please take a look at my comments above and ping me when you would like me to take another look. simongraham (talk) 23:13, 10 August 2025 (UTC)
- That Eocarcharia, improved.png is not in use on the page due to its inaccuracies. It looks like all of the suggestions you gave have been implemented by me and SlvrHawk. I am confused by what you mean about the Cau doi however. AFH (talk) 18:35, 11 August 2025 (UTC)
- @Augustios Paleo:@SlvrHwk: Thank you all your excellent work. I see that the DOI issue, along with the remainder of the issues seems to the resolved. I believe that this article meets the criteria to be a Good Article.
Pass simongraham (talk) 06:03, 13 August 2025 (UTC)
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