Talk:DC Fashion Week
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Intro
[edit]This line in the intro seems promotional, almost like a direct quote: "DCFW appears to be way ahead of the curve. The models represent the real men and women of D.C. and are of all different sizes and races. The future of fashion is hopeful for people of all backgrounds."
I could not find any reference to the DCFW in the cited text (Zobe Magazine Sample Version).
I'm not sure if it would be appropriate to remove the line just yet (wikipedia newbie here), but does anyone know what was intended by it?
-- DankLiteraryThemes (talk) 01:34, 23 August 2020 (UTC)
- You're absolutely right. The only part of these three sentences that consists of concrete information is the second half of the second sentence, and that part's just trivia. The rest of it is pure public relations fluff. I've removed it. Largoplazo (talk) 03:37, 23 August 2020 (UTC)
- Ah, thank you. -- DankLiteraryThemes (talk) 08:48, 23 August 2020 (UTC)