Talk:Citigroup Center/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 23:29, 1 July 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:29, 1 July 2021 (UTC)

Basic stuff and comments

• "Each facade segments" → "Each facade segment"
• Add a hyphen between "energy saving".
• Hyphen between "silver colored".
• Remove the comma after "finalized in 1973".
• The → The
• Remove the comma after "standard elevators".
• "made a decision" → "decided"
• "space in the building rented" → "space in the building was rented"
• Remove the comma after "$2.32 billion".
• Remove the comma after "architectural success".
• Check for citation ordering issues.
• Wall Street Journal → The Wall Street Journal
• Mark references from The New York Times with "|url-access=limited".
• Mark references from The Real Deal New York with "|url-access=subscription".
• Wikilink Paul Goldberger, Grace Glueck, David W. Dunlap, and Ada Louise Huxtable.

Progress

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Thanks. I've done all of these. Epicgenius (talk) 22:23, 2 July 2021 (UTC)

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