Talk:Blitz-class aviso
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GA Review
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Reviewer: Dank (talk · contribs) 20:12, 22 June 2013 (UTC)
Review:
- "ships of any time": ships of any kind? - Dank (push to talk) 20:12, 22 June 2013 (UTC)
- Yup. Wonder what I was thinking of when I wrote that. Parsecboy (talk) 16:30, 24 June 2013 (UTC)
- "While serving as a torpedo boat flotilla leader": I'd prefer "When serving as torpedo boat flotilla leaders" or "When leading torpedo boat flotillas"
- Fixed.
- "speed this": this speed
- Apparently I'm dyslexic periodically.
- "The ships were also equipped with four 8.7 cm K L/23 guns in single mounts. They also carried one 35 cm (14 in) torpedo tube mounted in the bow.": The ships were also equipped with four 8.7 cm K L/23 guns in single mounts and one 35 cm (14 in) torpedo tube mounted in the bow.
- Done.
- "In 1891–1892": I'm fighting a losing battle here, but I think some readers are going to wonder what this means, if not "In 1891 and 1892". - Dank (push to talk) 20:23, 22 June 2013 (UTC)
- Sounds fine to me.
- Otherwise:
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
- a (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- - Dank (push to talk) 21:56, 22 June 2013 (UTC)
- Thanks for reviewing the article, Dan. Parsecboy (talk) 16:30, 24 June 2013 (UTC)
- - Dank (push to talk) 21:56, 22 June 2013 (UTC)
- Pass/Fail:
Passed. - Dank (push to talk) 23:40, 24 June 2013 (UTC)
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