Talk:Yun Jin

GA review

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Nominator: Gommeh (talk · contribs) 18:33, 4 November 2025 (UTC)

Reviewer: 750h+ (talk · contribs) 03:52, 22 November 2025 (UTC)

I'll review this in a bit. 750h+ 03:52, 22 November 2025 (UTC)

@750h+: Courtesy ping, since it's been a week since your last comment. Gommeh 📖   🎮 20:54, 28 November 2025 (UTC)

OOps sorry, comments incoming today. 750h+ 08:28, 30 November 2025 (UTC)

prose

lead

• The character's English voice actor is Judy Alice Lee, the Chinese voice actor is He Wenxiao, the Japanese voice actor is Kotori Koiwai, and the Korean voice actor is Sa Moon-young. I feel like this is kind of repetitive. what about: The voice actors are Judy Alice Lee (English), He Wenxiao (Chinese), Kotori Koiwai (Japanese), and Sa Moon-young (Korean).. if there are any alternatives then that's fine too.

• I'm not quite sure if it's repetitive; several other Genshin GA's have it like this such as Arlecchino (Genshin Impact). To phrase it like you suggested would sound weird compared to the other articles I think. Gommeh 📖   🎮 16:04, 30 November 2025 (UTC)

creation and design

• new characters Shenhe and Yun Jin along with character illustrations maybe a comma after "Jin"

• Done. Gommeh 📖   🎮 16:04, 30 November 2025 (UTC)

• to use a polearm weapon ==> "to wield a polearm weapon" ("weapon" isn't needed, as a polearm is a weapon. However, can we link "polearm"?)

• Rephrased and linked. Gommeh 📖   🎮 16:04, 30 November 2025 (UTC)

• expressed the desire to design an ==> "expressed a desire to design an"

• Done. Gommeh 📖   🎮 16:04, 30 November 2025 (UTC)

• Chinese art forms such as "opera" in real life and conceived ==> "Chinese art forms, such as "opera" in real life, and conceived "

• Rephrased. Gommeh 📖   🎮 16:04, 30 November 2025 (UTC)

• hoping to arouse people's interest in traditional ==> "hoping to spark interest in traditional" (any similar word to 'spark' can be used but 'people's' is redundant)

• Done. Gommeh 📖   🎮 16:04, 30 November 2025 (UTC)

• rather than theatrical costume ==> "rather than a theatrical costume"

• Done. Gommeh 📖   🎮 16:04, 30 November 2025 (UTC)

• In the animated cutscene The Divine Damsel of Devastation after Yun Jin ==> "In the animated cutscene, The Divine Damsel, of Devastation after Yun Jin"

• Not done, for grammatical reasons. There's no comma in "The Divine Damsel of Devastation". I did touch up the punctuation though. Gommeh 📖   🎮 16:04, 30 November 2025 (UTC)

• which could lead to some distortion ==> "which could cause distortion"

• Done. Gommeh 📖   🎮 16:04, 30 November 2025 (UTC)

appearances

• successor of the traditional art form "Liyue opera" skilled in creating comma needed after "opera"
• primary damage dealer in the team ==> "primary damage dealer for the team"

I'm just going to completely overhaul the appearances section, as it looks to have been poorly translated over from the Chinese Wikipedia. I should have paid more attention to it. Gommeh 📖   🎮 16:04, 30 November 2025 (UTC)

promotion and reception

• no problems here

sources and images

• source 25's archive link is a duplicate of 24's link, that needs to be fixed

• Fixed. Gommeh 📖   🎮 16:04, 30 November 2025 (UTC)

• sources seem of fine reliability for a GA
• spot checked some sources, check out
• image licensing is okay
• the images require WP:ALT text

• Added. Gommeh 📖   🎮 16:04, 30 November 2025 (UTC)

other criteria

• article is stable
• checks out for being broad

@Gommeh: that's all i got! happy to pass once my current comments are addressed. 750h+ 09:07, 30 November 2025 (UTC)

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Did you know nomination

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The result was: promoted by Crisco 1492 (talk) 13:08, 27 January 2026 (UTC)

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• ... that Yun Jin's appearance in Genshin Impact draws inspiration from Chinese historical figures like Hua Mulan? Source:
  • ALT1: ... that miHoYo decided not to dub Yun Jin's singing lines in Genshin Impact because they represent aspects of traditional Peking opera? Sources: ,
  • Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Fluier

Created by Gommeh (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 7 past nominations.

Gommeh 📖   🎮 16:23, 2 December 2025 (UTC).

• article recently promoted to GA and looks to be in good shape; hooks are interesting and cited; Earwig passes; QPQ checks out. Good to go. ~Darth Stabro^{Talk • Contribs} 17:49, 2 December 2025 (UTC)

'professional opera enthusiasts'

Is being an enthusiast their profession? Or are they enthusiasts only of professional opera, but underwhelmed by amateur-performed opera? ~2026-51230-3 (talk) 16:55, 4 February 2026 (UTC)