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Latest comment: 1 year ago by Z. Patterson in topic GA review

Did you know nomination

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: rejected by Theleekycauldron (talk) 00:56, 9 February 2023 (UTC)Reply

Created by Tintor2 (talk). Self-nominated at 22:26, 28 January 2023 (UTC). Note: As of October 2022, all changes made to promoted hooks will be logged by a bot. The log for this nomination can be found at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Yozora, so please watch a successfully closed nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.Reply

I think we'll have to abort this nomination. A user requested the Yozora article to be deleted.Tintor2 (talk) 23:11, 29 January 2023 (UTC)Reply

    I am at my three time limit so I'm also reviewing Template:Did you know nominations/New York Yankees.Tintor2 (talk) 22:38, 28 January 2023 (UTC)Reply

    GA review

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    This review is transcluded from Talk:Yozora/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

    Nominator: Tintor2 (talk · contribs) 14:05, 2 July 2025 (UTC)Reply

    Reviewer: Z. Patterson (talk · contribs) 23:40, 4 July 2025 (UTC)Reply

    I will be reviewing the article. Z. Patterson (talk) 23:40, 4 July 2025 (UTC)Reply

    @Tintor2: The article appears to be well-written, stable, verifiable, broad in coverage, neutral, and illustrated. However, I have some points to address.
    • The sentence, "Yozora was created by director Tetsuya Nomura as a minor character in his introduction who would be a more important in future projects; his portrayal in the DLC Re Mind was made intentionally difficult to beat" could be rewritten to say, "Yozora was created by director Tetsuya Nomura as a minor character in his introduction who would be a more important in future projects, as his portrayal in the DLC Re Mind was intentionally made difficult to beat."
      • Done.
    • The article cites some Valnet sources. Are you able to find sources that are better than Valnet, per WP:VALNET? The best Valnet source in the article would be the one from Screen Rant. I see mentions of Comic Book Resources in the article. When I worked on the article for Ochaco Uraraka, I removed or replaced instances of Valnet sources if I could. If you choose to use sources from Game Rant or Screen Rant instead, I would suggest including a space before "Rant" and italicizing the titles of the websites.
      • Removed and revised
    • Numerial citations should be put in order.
      • Revised. Am I missing something?
    • Titles of websites should be italicized.
      • Done.
    • This citation needs to be corrected to the following: Williams, Leah J. (April 11, 2022). "Kingdom Hearts 4's Lost Master is a major mystery". GamesHub. Retrieved June 29, 2025.
      • Done.
    If you make these changes, I plan to pass this article as a good article.
    Z. Patterson (talk) 01:24, 5 July 2025 (UTC)Reply

    @Z. Patterson: Thanks for the review.Tintor2 (talk) 01:37, 5 July 2025 (UTC)Reply

    @Tintor2: You are welcome. I passed this as a GA. Good work. Z. Patterson (talk) 02:02, 5 July 2025 (UTC)Reply