Talk:Working Boy Center

Please clarify the tags @Deb:. I never heard of this organization before a week ago; I have no connection with it except that I happen to be one of the 15,000-some Jesuits in the world; and I could use help in identifying what parts of the article read like an advertisement. The tags went on so quickly after I created the article that it seems unlikely that the one placing the tags read the extensive, independent documentation furnished in the footnotes and additional references. Help! @Deb: Jzsj (talk) 14:51, 12 December 2016 (UTC)

Tell you what, try comparing what you originally wrote with some of the changes I've already made. For example, you wrote "Through CMT the Jesuits strive to give working children the help they need..." I amended it to "Its stated aim is to give working children help to..." Do you see the difference in emphasis? Do you see how stating the Jesuits' intention as if it were a fact requires some evidence to back it up? Deb (talk) 12:26, 13 December 2016 (UTC)