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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 5 September 2019 and 4 December 2019. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Happyjujugirl. Peer reviewers: Cactus0195, Yourstrulyy.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 05:03, 18 January 2022 (UTC)Reply

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Overall, a great start to your page. In the education section, you never mention what exactly she studied in school and what degree she graduated with. I think if you can add that it would be great. I also feel as if for your filmography section where you mention her work as a director, actress and scriptwriter that it can be done in a chart for a better visual. As well as for the description of truth or dare I feel as if you could have explained a little more because you just mentioned it was about 6 youths, but what exactly about them? I found no spelling mistakes in your article so that’s great as you spent time to ensure your grammar and spelling were correct. Just take some time review it again before the final submission to use some of the suggestions I had. Goodluck!~~Yourstrulyy