Talk:Wolverine: Origins

Plot synopsis is very poorly written

Plots on wikipedia should generally be short, concise, leave out extended details, and give people a rough understanding of what the subject is about. This plot, however, goes into details like, "A tear rolls down Wolverine's cheek as, he notes to himself, just how much his son seems like him". Those are the kinds of details that could probably be left out. Don't write down word-for-word what happens in the comic book, but explain the general plot outline of the book.

Ok, so a complete re-write is in order for the plot. Things need to be removed, citing sources!!!, no run-on sentences and paragraphs. Yes it's nice to know the facts, but you should only write the facts and not go on to describe each and every scenario.

I wish I could do this, but I don't own the complete series and couldn't even begin to sum up each issue. However, this is badly needed as in its current stage, it's extremely difficult to edit. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Poetnk (talk • contribs) 18:14, 25 December 2010 (UTC)

I found this sentence confusing: "Wolverine arranges for The Winter Soldier to hire Deadpool to kill Wolverine."

--MC — Preceding unsigned comment added by 86.36.66.129 (talk) 04:38, 9 June 2014 (UTC)