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Latest comment: 19 years ago by Karanacs in topic Untitled

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Hi,

I am the author of this page. The page was tagged for clean up. What is the problem ?

Please use email as I can not regularly check this page: jochen_f@gmx.de

Best regards,

Jochen f 14:35, 17 May 2007 (UTC)Reply

I didn't put up the cleanup tag, but I see a few problems with the article.
  • Wikipedia encourages the use of sections. For a painter, the sections might include biography, themes in his work, and influence or criticism of his work.
  • You might want to read the manual of style and the corresponding biography manual of style for pointers on what in the article needs to be fixed.
  • You need to avoid weasel words.
  • You should cite your sources so that this doesn't appear to be original research. Especially, all quotatins need a citation
  • Articles should not include a gallery of images. If you discuss the paintings in the body of the article, you can incorporate those images into the corresponding text.

You're off to a good start, but to have a good article or featured article you would need to do a lot of work. Good luck, and thanks for contributing.Karanacs 17:59, 21 June 2007 (UTC)Reply