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Featured articleWhy Marx Was Right is a featured article; it (or a previous version of it) has been identified as one of the best articles produced by the Wikipedia community. Even so, if you can update or improve it, please do so.
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August 24, 2021Good article nomineeListed
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A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on August 25, 2021.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that in Why Marx Was Right, author Terry Eagleton aims to refute ten common objections to Marxism?
Current status: Featured article

Review summaries

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First collapse box is for the original summaries I wrote, where each paragraph is a review. The second is the rewriting by theme of comments. The next version is the one in the article, with copyediting to be more concise and reduce reliance on quotation. (All of this was done with Wikipedia:Copyediting reception sections in mind.) I'm including the old ones just in case they're useful to refer back to.

Bilorv (talk) 00:13, 18 August 2021 (UTC)Reply

Inaccessible sources

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  • Meynell, Hugo. Heythrop Journal; Oxford Vol. 56, Iss. 3, (May 2015): 516-517. DOI:10.1111/heyj.12249_57 Why Marx Was Right. By Terry Eagleton. Pp. xiv, 258. New Haven/London, Yale University Press, 2011, £28.91.
  • The Irrepressible Revolutionary: Marx for the Uninitiated, the Unconvinced and the Unrepentant Palmer, Bryan D. Critique; Abingdon Vol. 40, Iss. 1, (2012): 119. DOI:10.1080/00111619.2011.640067
  • MARX'S IDEAS STILL RELEVANT: [FOURTH Edition] The Oregonian; Portland, Or. [Portland, Or]. 22 Aug 1993: E02.
  • Most of Richard Wolff's Times Literary Supplement review (beyond the free preview).

Help accessing any of these sources would be appreciated, though there's likely nothing in them not found in other sources. — Bilorv (talk) 00:13, 18 August 2021 (UTC)Reply

Do you still need these? And have you tried WP:RX? I can help if still needed—just ping me! czar 17:37, 23 January 2022 (UTC)Reply
Thanks for the offer, but I think it's alright at this point—I don't think there'll be anything in them that the article is incomplete without. — Bilorv (talk) 23:19, 23 January 2022 (UTC)Reply

GA Review

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Reviewer: ExcellentWheatFarmer (talk · contribs) 19:24, 23 August 2021 (UTC)Reply


I'll take care of this one, I'll try and have some initial comments out in the next hour or so. This is my first GA review, so I'll try my best! -ExcellentWheatFarmer (talk) 19:24, 23 August 2021 (UTC)Reply

Copyvio

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  • Green checkmark Used Earwig's Copyvio detector, and the only visible ones were quotations from reviews in the §Reception section and the title of the book itself. Seems perfectly fine in this department.

Stability

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  • Green checkmark The page itself was created by one singular user in full a full 7 or so years after it was initially made as a redirect to Eagleton's page, and the talk page history was very short. This article is very much stable.

Prose / MoS

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  • Blue question mark A few minor prose issues here and there:
    • Second para of the lede, "a number of critics" -> "several/some/many critics have said"
    • Third para of the lede, "strength of argument" -> "the strength of argument"
    • Second para of Background, "prior to the economic crisis" -> "before the economic crisis" and "a number of reviewers" -> "several/some/many"
    • First para of Synopsis, "capitalist ones, and" -> "capitalist ones and"
    • Second para of Synopsis, "as determinist" -> "as being determinist" and "appropriate" -> "an appropriate"
    • Third para of Synopsis, "a human nature" -> "human nature" and "casual relationship on" -> "casual relationship with"
    • Fifth para of Synopsis, "independent from Marxism" -> "independent of Marxism", "interplay" -> "the interplay", and "under capitalism nature" -> "under capitalism, nature"
    • First para of Writing style, "mean that" -> "meant that"
    • First para of Subject matter, "surplus value" -> "surplus-value" and "idealism, because" -> "idealism because"
    • Second para of Subject matter, "Soviet Union, and" -> "Soviet Union and" and "selective portrayal of facts" -> "the selective portrayal of facts"
  • Aside from these, however, the article was very well written.

Referencing

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  • Green checkmark All the citations and references are from trustable and verifiable sources, and there's plenty of inline citations. Very good.

POV

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  • Green checkmark Maintains a pretty even balance of the positive and negative aspects of the book — seems fine to me.

Original research

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  • Green checkmark Doesn't look like it, unless the nominator is secretly Eagleton himself.

Focus / scope / coverage / completeness

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  • Green checkmark The article covers all the key content needed for a book like Why Marx Was Right and seems to thoroughly detail them all.

Media

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  • Green checkmark Ever piece of media on the article is freely licensed, aside from the book cover, which is fine to use in the context of the article.

Conclusion

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Aside from the few minor grammatical changes specified in the given section, this article is practically a hair's length away from GA status. Overall a great article. Impressive work @Bilorv:, be sure to let me know your thoughts on it. ExcellentWheatFarmer (talk) 21:05, 23 August 2021 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for the review, ExcellentWheatFarmer. I am of course biased but it looks like you've assessed all the relevant things. I've offered an alternative to one of the wording changes you requested and implemented the rest. — Bilorv (talk) 22:52, 23 August 2021 (UTC)Reply
Alright, in which case I’m happy to pass this. Good job!ExcellentWheatFarmer (talk) 08:40, 24 August 2021 (UTC)Reply

The Lead

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The writer is a 'literary theorist, critic, and public intellectual'. Not a philosopher nor historian. Xx236 (talk) 13:01, 8 February 2022 (UTC)Reply

@Xx236: I notice you're quoting the article Terry Eagleton, which is not a reliable source, but I'm more confused about where the lead calls Eagleton a philosopher and a historian. I can only see the descriptor "academic", and only recall having called him an "academic". — Bilorv (talk) 18:02, 8 February 2022 (UTC)Reply
The writer has no academic title in philosophy. A reader of this page should be warned.Xx236 (talk) 07:14, 9 February 2022 (UTC)Reply
Well to quote the article "He is currently Distinguished Professor of English Literature at Lancaster University", a university I was a lecturer at for several years, many years ago. I was at Lancaster University from pretty well when it started. It evolved to be a top class university. So, what are you trying to say? --Bduke (talk) 07:26, 9 February 2022 (UTC)Reply
I've worked on dozens of book articles and can't recall ever specifying a profession that the author is "not", including many books by non-academics. No source has been provided that verifies that Eagleton is not a philosopher (not a chartered job description) or has never held a position in a philosophy department, and philosophy is only one of several subject areas of Why Marx Was Right. — Bilorv (talk) 08:49, 9 February 2022 (UTC)Reply
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FYI zh:Talk:马克思为什么是对的#典范条目评选 czar 04:34, 14 November 2022 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for this, Czar, and it's a huge honour to have your work translated into another language. I'm grateful to all editors involved. — Bilorv (talk) 22:21, 14 November 2022 (UTC)Reply

Reception

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I'm curious as to why the reception section refers only to the publication, rather than the authors of the reviews? For example, why does the article state:

Times Higher Education enjoyed Eagleton's "infallible dash, ... unnerving hyperbole and explosive jokes"

Instead of:

Fred Inglis enjoyed Eagleton's "infallible dash, ... unnerving hyperbole and explosive jokes" :3 F4U (they/it) 05:39, 21 June 2023 (UTC)Reply

@Freedom4U: this is through discussion between myself and czar at the FAC. These critics are typically non-notable, but the publications are often recognisable names (and also give a sense of political orientation) and are easiest for readability. — Bilorv (talk) 16:09, 21 June 2023 (UTC)Reply
@Bilorv: One issue that arises by referring to each critic by their publication is that the publications themselves aren't critics. The following selections are awkward because of this usage:
  • Dissenting critics included Actualidad Económica, The Guardian's Tristram Hunt and The American Conservative
  • In contrast, critics including The Australian, Libertarian Papers and Chetty criticised Eagleton's humour as lacking
These are publications that critics write in, but they aren't critics in themselves. ~ F4U (talkthey/it) 13:47, 30 October 2023 (UTC)Reply
I agree that this is an issue, but every method I've tried has substantial issues, including:
  • Full name and publication in all instances (unreadable)
  • Surname only (unfollowable)
  • Full name and publication on first instance, then surname only (combines unreadability with un-followability)
Ultimately this could be worth raising at a wider forum, but this article's status quo is the result of rejecting several other ways of referring to reviews. — Bilorv (talk) 18:48, 30 October 2023 (UTC)Reply

No sources on the "criticism" layer at the summary section

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this "criticism" section at the summary part feels a lot like an opinionated essay to me. It doesn't cite any sources regarding it, and often attributes to vague authority figures like "critics argue that" without specifically citing any professional sources supporting the claim. Who are these "critics?"

I've added tags reminding readers of it. Aegesar (talk) 18:58, 7 December 2025 (UTC)Reply

  1. Quoted in Spanish: "excelente base teórica".[9]
  2. Quoted in Spanish: "excelente base teórica".[16]
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