Talk:Wayne Cryts
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 | A fact from Wayne Cryts appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 20 July 2022 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
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Did you know nomination
[edit]- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Theleekycauldron (talk) 12:01, 12 July 2022 (UTC)
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- ... that American farmer Wayne Cryts being arrested for removing his soybeans from a bankrupt grain elevator led to a change in legislation by Congress?
Created by SL93 (talk). Self-nominated at 23:57, 25 June 2022 (UTC).
New and long enough, QPQ done, all non-lead ¶ with citations, a copyvio check reveals no problems, hook content is interesting and is verified with a citation to a reliable source in the article. North America1000 00:35, 26 June 2022 (UTC)
- @SL93 and Northamerica1000: I'm not thrilled with the grammar in this hook. New hooks are proposed below:
- ALT0a: ...that American farmer Wayne Cryts's arrest for removing his soybeans from a bankrupt grain elevator led to a change in legislation by Congress?
- ALT0b ... that the arrest of American farmer Wayne Cryts for removing his soybeans from a bankrupt grain elevator led to a change in legislation by Congress?
- Thoughts? Z1720 (talk) 22:59, 9 July 2022 (UTC)
- I'm not sure how "being arrested" is bad grammar, but the alt hooks are fine. SL93 (talk) 23:10, 9 July 2022 (UTC)
- Maybe "grammar" is the wrong word ("flow" might have been better) but "being arrested" sounded weird to me. Promoters can make a determination. Z1720 (talk) 23:14, 9 July 2022 (UTC)
- I'm fine with ALT0a. North America1000 09:29, 11 July 2022 (UTC)
- I'm not sure how "being arrested" is bad grammar, but the alt hooks are fine. SL93 (talk) 23:10, 9 July 2022 (UTC)