Talk:Ward Walsh

GA Review

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Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 17:14, 24 October 2023 (UTC)

I'll review this one. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 17:14, 24 October 2023 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Comments

• Why is "Touchdowns" the only link in the NFL statistics section of the infobox?
  • Linked the rest.
• He made the Oilers as an undrafted free agent in 1971 and spent until 1972 with the team before being released. maybe simplify to just "and was released by the team in 1972"
  • Changed.
• You have two sections titled "Professional career"
  • Fixed.
• He finished his sophomore season, 1968, with 103 carries for 384 yards recommend emdashes instead of commas, "season—1968—with"
  • Done.
• being ninth in the Big Eight Conference in total touchdowns while helping the Buffaloes finish with a record of 4–6 make this a standalone sentence.
  • Done.
• 1971 NFL Draft, but signed with the, comma not needed
  • Removed.
• Ref spot check: 3, 6, 10, 15, 18

Looks good, putting on hold. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 19:03, 30 October 2023 (UTC)

• @Gonzo fan2007: BeanieFan11 (talk) 01:06, 31 October 2023 (UTC)
  • Looks good, passing. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 14:10, 31 October 2023 (UTC)

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