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Latest comment: 10 years ago by Shannon.tai in topic Suggestions for improving vision disorder

Suggestions for improving vision disorder

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Hi, my name is Shannon Tai and I am a student wikipedia editor from Saint Louis University. I appreciate how the article distinguished the differences between vision disorder and eye disease. However, there are no citations within this stub. Citations need to be incorporated into this stub to provide reliability. Also, the epidemiology section has nothing in it. It would be helpful to explain the photo of the right mapping out the prevalence of vision disorder. This article could benefit from a broad coverage of information regarding vision disorder. I recommend using the following citation to expand this article. It talks about color vision disorder. The abstract to this citation could be accessed by the link at the end of the citation. Shannon.tai (talk)

Ayed S, Jeddi A, Kallal Z. Diabetes and color vision disorder detected by the Farnsworth 100 Hue test. Europe PMC. 1990; 13(10):506-510.  Preceding unsigned comment added by Shannon.tai (talkcontribs) 01:21, 26 March 2016 (UTC)Reply