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Talk:Ulysses Simpson Wiggins

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Latest comment: 7 years ago by Meerturtle

The format is really good. It can be difficult to make a new Wikipedia page and adhere to all the rule but you are doing well. The first paragraph is really good it. It looks similar to other Wikipedia pages that focus on a person. You touch on what he was known for and all the important things about him. The section that deals with his early life and education is good too. The part that still was confusing for was when you said he received his "A.B" but now that it is linked to another wikipageit would be a lot easier to understand for anyone reading it. The box with his picture and his information is really well done. Overall the page is really good. In my opinion there really is not much to say about your page. The info here is good and all well organized in their sections. There might be minor mistakes that I did not catch but this is very presentable.

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I'm not going to lie, I was really confused looking for your talk page because it's been officially made the article's talk page. Congratulations! The article looks like a bona fide Wikipedia article, mostly because it is. You paid great attention to detail, and laid out the information really well. I especially like the picture of him you chose to use. It's a lot different than other historical figures' I'm used to seeing. The only thing I would change is the "Death in 1966" top-level section. I looked up different dead people on Wikipedia (Michael Jackson, George H.W. Bush, Selena, etc.) and many of the top-level sections about their death don't include the date that they died in the section title. A bit nitpicky, but that's the only advice I can offer. This article looks great! Meerturtle (talk) 11:10, 1 May 2019 (UTC)Reply