Talk:USS Callister: Into Infinity
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Errors in narrative and grammar
[edit]The style of episodic tv plot summary is to list plot developments as they happen along a timeline. This does not do that. It describes parts of the storyline occurring simultaneous to other parts of the storyline even though we as the viewer haven’t seen them yet. It’s a very amateurish summary of the plot. Also, it contains this nonsensical doozy: “She discovers it to a digital creation…” people should check their work before they submit. This is nonsensical drivel and I assume the same person who wrote the plot summary which doesn’t pay respect to the timeline of the narrative. 87.102.0.47 (talk) 21:29, 12 April 2025 (UTC)
- Sentences like 'After seeing the news where she can close her eyes when in the bathroom' make absolutely no sense, was this written by some mediocre AI? 213.93.57.221 (talk) 18:48, 27 April 2025 (UTC)
- per MOS:WAF, we write the plot to be as concise as possible. This often means ignoring the order presented in the show to favor one that explains events in a concise manner. Masem (t) 19:09, 27 April 2025 (UTC)