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Latest comment: 14 years ago by Realreporterman in topic Should we add sales data right sidebar?

Seems to be written as an advertisement

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This article seems to have been written as an advertisement. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 216.48.60.246 (talk) 19:39, 13 November 2008 (UTC)Reply

I was reading the page and noticed this sentence:

That first store was quickly followed by mail order catalogs to serve our customers as they were deployed around the globe. Wherever fighting men and women were stationed, the catalogs soon followed.

By using the word "our" that suggests the articles was written by US Cav themselves and not by an impartial person. I suggest it be changed to "their". 198.203.175.175edwin

Should we add sales data right sidebar?

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Does anyone think we should add sales data to the right margin, like the larger corporations have? E.g. Microsoft, et al. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Microsoft Realreporterman (talk) 10:19, 25 January 2012 (UTC)Reply