Talk:Trapper Nelson/GA2

GA Review

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Reviewer: Roh^G ??· 16:59, 17 August 2011 (UTC)

Nominator:Quadell

Rate	Attribute	Review Comment
	1. Well-written:
	1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct.	Yes!the lead is good
	1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation.	Yes!It follows MoS
	2. Verifiable with no original research:
	2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline.	Yes!
	2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose).	Quiet good.
	2c. it contains no original research.	Not at all.
	3. Broad in its coverage:
	3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic.	yes.
	3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style).	Well Focused and not controversial.
	4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each.	Yes
	5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute.	It doesn't have at-least 60 edits from its creation and not more than 30 since 2010
	6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio:
	6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content.
	6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions.
	7. Overall assessment.	Done!

Errors/Comments

• "Tarzan of the Loxahatchee". citation?
  • The lede doesn't have footnotes, per WP:LEAD. But the same quote is cited to footnote #7 down in the "Settlement on the Loxahatchee" section. – Quadell ^(talk) 21:41, 18 August 2011 (UTC)

 Done

• The reference which is used as "Jupiter Kids History: Trapper Nelson". was dead.
  • Oops, you're right. I've fixed that. – Quadell ^(talk) 21:41, 18 August 2011 (UTC)

 Done

• as per Wikipedia:Manual of Style (numbers), there should be a non-breaking space -   between a number and the unit of measurement.240 pounds->240 pounds.
  • Good point. I've fixed that now. – Quadell ^(talk) 21:45, 18 August 2011 (UTC)

 Done