Talk:Tigrosa helluo
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[edit]I edited this article for grammatical errors, sentence structure issues, and some minor missing information. Overall, this page is very well done. My main issue edited for was the use of future tense - "will" - in defining characteristics and behavioral attributes of the species. Additionally, I added an extra photo of a female T. helluo. In the "Behavior" section, I referenced your sources to add additional details about the experimental studies. SlyFox52 (talk) 23:54, 1 November 2020 (UTC)
Hello! This was a nice article to read. I cleaned up the habitat and distribution sections to make them a bit more distinct. I also fixed some sentence structure in the sexual dimorphism section to help make it a bit more clear. Shaynarosenbloom (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 02:08, 4 November 2020 (UTC)
This was a well written and concise article. I think you could maybe add more about courtship rituals but what you have about mating and life cycle is good. I have added a taxonomy section detailing how the Tigrosa genus was established from distinguishing previous members of the genus Hogna. I also wrote about the differences between Pardosa milvina and Tigrosa helluo species since they are both common wolf spiders in the United States. Prernask (talk) 03:02, 4 November 2020 (UTC)