Talk:The Springfield Connection/GA1
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GA Review
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GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
This article is in decent shape, but it needs more work before it becomes a Good Article.
- Is it well written?
- A. The prose is clear, concise and understandable to an appropriately broad audience, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
- In the Production section, "The hand puppet is an homage to McGruff the Crime Dog – the producers had wanted to use McGruff, but that show had refused to allow the character to be used", "an" ---> "a". Also, what "show" are you referring to in the sentence?
- Done. -- 18:03, 3 February 2009 (UTC)
- Check.
- Done. -- 18:03, 3 February 2009 (UTC)
- In the Production section, "The hand puppet is an homage to McGruff the Crime Dog – the producers had wanted to use McGruff, but that show had refused to allow the character to be used", "an" ---> "a". Also, what "show" are you referring to in the sentence?
- B. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:
- In the lead, you might want to correctly link "The French Connection" to its correspondence article. In the Production section, it would be best if "David Mirkin" was linked once, per here. In the Cultural references section, "Additionally, Marge's training sequences features homages to Police Academy and Speed" ---> "Additionally, Marge's training sequences features homages to Police Academy (1984) and Speed (1994)", so that it can provide context for the reader.
- Done and done. -- Scorpion0422 18:03, 3 February 2009 (UTC)
- Check.
- Done and done. -- Scorpion0422 18:03, 3 February 2009 (UTC)
- In the lead, you might want to correctly link "The French Connection" to its correspondence article. In the Production section, it would be best if "David Mirkin" was linked once, per here. In the Cultural references section, "Additionally, Marge's training sequences features homages to Police Academy and Speed" ---> "Additionally, Marge's training sequences features homages to Police Academy (1984) and Speed (1994)", so that it can provide context for the reader.
- A. The prose is clear, concise and understandable to an appropriately broad audience, and the spelling and grammar are correct:
- Is it verifiable with no original research, as shown by a source spot-check?
- A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:
- B. Reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose):
- C. It contains no original research:
- D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism:
- A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:
- B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style):
- A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:
- Is it neutral?
- It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:
- It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:
- Is it stable?
- It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:
- It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:
- Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?
- A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content:
- B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
- A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail:
- Not much to do. If the statements above can be answered, I will pass the article. Good luck with improving this article!
- Pass or Fail:
-- ThinkBlue (Hit BLUE) 16:58, 3 February 2009 (UTC)
- Everything has been done. Thanks for the review. -- Scorpion0422 18:03, 3 February 2009 (UTC)
- You're welcome. Thank you to Scorpion for getting the stuff I left at the talk page, because I have gone off and placed the article as GA. Congrats. ;) -- ThinkBlue (Hit BLUE) 18:28, 3 February 2009 (UTC)