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Latest comment: 8 months ago by USnoozieULoozie in topic Plot rewrite?

Kamthatka?

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Could that possibly mean Kamchatka? Varlaam (talk) 05:16, 3 December 2010 (UTC)Reply

Plot rewrite?

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I hope it is ok that I added a tag to rewrite the Plot section of this article. I had to look up what to do as I'm trying not to be a pest at the Tea House asking a bunch of questions back to back.

I made an attempt at improving the section. It started off as one long story without paragraphs. I split it up where it made sense. While doing that I noticed a lot of issues with spelling, punctuation, and sentence structure. It is impossible to follow in many areas and it bounces from past and present tense. I think it is best that someone with experience and knowledge of the book take over at this point. The easiest thing would be to do a complete rewrite. Something shorter and more precise would be a vast improvement. USnoozieULoozie (talk) 21:27, 10 November 2025 (UTC)Reply