Talk:The Little Mother
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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 22:52, 19 September 2015 (UTC)
I should complete this tomorrow hopefully JAGUAR 22:52, 19 September 2015 (UTC)
Initial comments
[edit]- The leads needs to be expanded slightly to summarise the article. There is nothing on what critics thought about the film in the lead
- "The film stars Marie Eline who goes to her mother's employer" - does she have a character name?
- I would recommend splitting plot and production into two sections
- "The artist, a wealthy, good-hearted man, pleased with the child's pluck" - pluck??
- "The single reel drama, approximately 990 feet long" - always worth converting into metres
Close - promoted
[edit]I had to do a little bit of cleaning up, but this should be good to go. The references are adequate and the article is quite comprehensive given the era. Well done 
JAGUAR 16:36, 20 September 2015 (UTC)