Talk:The Catch II

GA Review

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Nominator: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 22:15, 21 June 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: BigChrisKenney (talk · contribs) 06:48, 6 January 2025 (UTC)

Hello, @Gonzo fan2007: My senior in GA reviews and articles! This will be my first sports related GA review, but I'm sure we can get the article passed. BigChrisKenney (talk) 06:48, 6 January 2025 (UTC)

Intro

Good!

Background

"San Francisco won 6 out of their last 8 games, although it was not enough to overcome the Atlanta Falcons, who won the NFC West."

• If you take out the appositive, the sentence reads -San Francisco who won the NFC West. A rephrase such as; "San Franciso won 6 out of their last 8 games, but lost the NFC West to the Atlanta Falcons." Or something similar might be better.

Reworded. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 22:26, 7 January 2025 (UTC)

Game summary

First half

Made some edits you may wish to review.

Looks good! « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 22:17, 7 January 2025 (UTC)

Second half

Made some edits you may wish to review.

Looks good! « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 22:17, 7 January 2025 (UTC)

The play

Made some edits you may wish to review.

Looks good! « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 22:17, 7 January 2025 (UTC)

End of the game

Good!

Box score

Good!

Analysis

Good!

Officiating

Good!

Owen's struggles

"Owens, on his performance up to this point, after the game described it thus: "I let the team down. I was horrible"."

• This sentence seems to be a bit tricky. I would suggest "After the game, Owens commented on his performance before the historic catch saying: "I let the team down. I was horrible". Or something similar.

Reworded. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 22:27, 7 January 2025 (UTC)

Aftermath

Good!

Replay rule change

I made some edits you may wish to review.

Looks good! « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 22:18, 7 January 2025 (UTC)

Legacy

Good!

Perhaps adding The Catch III to the List of nicknamed NFL games and plays would be worthwile, especially since it is sourced [39].

Added. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 22:22, 7 January 2025 (UTC)

Sources

All appear to be pertinent and of acceptable quality.

Images

All are in the public domain.

I will await your review of my comments and edits before posting a final assesment. BigChrisKenney (talk) 07:32, 6 January 2025 (UTC)

Thanks BigChrisKenney, all comments addressed. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 22:28, 7 January 2025 (UTC)

Final Assessment

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, spelling, and grammar):

   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check.

   a (references):

   b (citations to reliable sources):

   c (OR):

   d (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects):

   b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):

   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall: Pass/Fail:

I've checked your changes and all looks above board! Congratulations on another GA! BigChrisKenney (talk) 05:21, 8 January 2025 (UTC)

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

Did you know nomination

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by SL93 talk 21:26, 29 January 2025 (UTC)

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• Comment or view
• Article history

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• ... that according to the NFL, The Catch II game had "one of the most amazing finishes in NFL postseason history"?

• Source: NFL.com

• • Reviewed: Prison healthcare in Australia

Improved to Good Article status by Gonzo fan2007 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 57 past nominations.

« Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 21:20, 9 January 2025 (UTC).

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: Second time doing this ever. I also think a hook about the challenge system being implemented would also be interesting. Let me know if I missed anything during a second opinion. Heart ^(talk) 03:07, 12 January 2025 (UTC)

HeartGlow30797, I am not sure I understand your review. Are you requesting a second opinion? It looks like you approved the hook but are asking for another opinion. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 13:56, 14 January 2025 (UTC)

Yes sorry, I made it a bit more clear just now. Sorry for any delays. Heart ^(talk) 14:46, 15 January 2025 (UTC)

Thanks HeartGlow30797. You actually need to add a "tick", something like {{subst:DYKtick}} to approve the hook and move the process forward. The red arrow tick you used is to call for a second reviewer to take a look. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 14:54, 15 January 2025 (UTC)

Further review makes me feel comfortable doing approving this unilaterally. Sorry for the delay. Heart ^(talk) 04:09, 18 January 2025 (UTC)