Talk:Texas pride
Add topicLatest comment: 1 year ago by Viriditas in topic Peer Review
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[edit]The biggest problem I observed was that it seemed that you were trying to tell a creative story rather than neutrally inform the reader about the topic. I think it would be beneficial to write in a more third person perspective in order to eliminate bias and the kind of narrative that you have created. Another thing I noticed was that the article went from past tense to present in a confusing way within and between the subtopics, which added to the off feeling of the narrative. Crhees (talk) 07:07, 18 November 2018 (UTC)Crhees
- The thing of it is, Texas pride is a creative story, once you drill down to the nitty gritty. I think it would be hard to separate the two, other than to say "Texans believe in some weird stuff". Viriditas (talk) 21:28, 6 December 2024 (UTC)