Talk:Tennena Cone
Add topic| Tennena Cone is a featured article; it (or a previous version of it) has been identified as one of the best articles produced by the Wikipedia community. Even so, if you can update or improve it, please do so. | |||||||||||||
| |||||||||||||
| Current status: Featured article | |||||||||||||
| This article is rated FA-class on Wikipedia's content assessment scale. It is of interest to the following WikiProjects: | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
| |||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
GA Review
[edit]The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
| GA toolbox |
|---|
| Reviewing |
- This review is transcluded from Talk:Tennena Cone/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Nominator: Volcanoguy (talk · contribs) 16:58, 9 July 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Crisco 1492 (talk · contribs) 15:10, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
I'll take this review. Please note that I may bring up subjects that are not specifically GA criteria. I will identify these explicitly when mentioning them, and they will not affect a pass or fail decision. These are intended to help you further refine the article, perhaps with the goal of taking it to FAC. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 15:10, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
Image review
[edit]- File:Tennena Cone.jpg - License checks out
- File:Mt. Edziza - 4037245997.jpg - License checks out
- File:Mt. Edziza - 4037996194.jpg - License checks out
- For the alt text and captions, mind that items that are not full sentences should not have periods (i.e., A black cone-shaped mountain rising over glacial ice and three climbers in the foreground)
Prose
[edit]- The cone is almost completely surrounded by glacial ice of Mount Edziza's ice cap - "the glacial ice", maybe?
- alkali basalt pillow lavas, tuff breccias and lapilli - This goes against WP:SEAOFBLUE
- WP:SEAOFBLUE claims when possible, do not place links next to each other, to avoid appearing like a single link; it's not always possible to avoid two links placed next to each other. Volcanoguy 16:05, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- The name of the volcanic cone was adopted 2 January 1980 on the National Topographic System map 104G/10 - "Adopted on", maybe?
- I'm not sure, the source claims "Adopted 2 January 1980 on 194G, as submitted by Geological Survey of Canada." Volcanoguy 15:51, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- Cassiar Land District of northwestern British Columbia, Canada, - "the Cassiar Land District of northwestern British Columbia, Canada," perhaps (applies to both)
- I don't think so. Volcanoguy 16:06, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- Its northern, eastern and southern flanks are mantled by the roughly 70-square-kilometre (27-square-mile) Mount Edziza ice cap and rises about 150 metres (490 feet) - Your subject was "flanks", so "rise" would be the correct verb.
- bedded tuff breccia - Sea of blue again
- See above. Volcanoguy 16:05, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- Pleistocene tristanite, trachyte - More sea of blue
- See above. Volcanoguy 16:05, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
Source review
[edit]- 2a - Supported
- 2d - Supported
- 2h - Supported
- 26 - Supported
- 51 - Supported
- Earwig shows no issues.
Conclusion
[edit]- Overall, article is in excellent shape. Just a few nipicks. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 15:10, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- Alright, that's all of my questions addressed. Happy to say that this meets the GA criteria. Congratulations. — Chris Woodrich (talk) 16:33, 27 December 2024 (UTC)
- Wikipedia featured articles
- Featured articles that have not appeared on the main page
- FA-Class WikiProject Volcanoes articles
- Low-importance WikiProject Volcanoes articles
- FA-Class Volcanism of Canada task force articles
- Low-importance Volcanism of Canada task force articles
- Volcanism of Canada task force articles
- All WikiProject Volcanoes pages
- FA-Class Mountain articles
- Low-importance Mountain articles
- All WikiProject Mountains pages
- FA-Class Canada-related articles
- Low-importance Canada-related articles
- FA-Class British Columbia articles
- Low-importance British Columbia articles
- FA-Class Geography of Canada articles
- Low-importance Geography of Canada articles
- Articles created or improved during WikiProject Canada's 10,000 Challenge
- All WikiProject Canada pages
- FA-Class geography articles
- Low-importance geography articles
- WikiProject Geography articles



