Talk:Temple Run/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Torchiest (talk · contribs) 13:40, 2 August 2012 (UTC)

Thanks for nominating this article. Unfortunately, it has too many problems to become a good article at this time, so I am going to fail it for now. The biggest problem is that most of the article is unsourced. Specifically, the Gameplay section has no sources, the Spinoffs section is almost entirely without sources, and the Reception section is only partially sourced. Also, a lot of the sourced details in the lead should be moved down into the body, and the lead should be rewritten to cover the entire article more evenly. In particular, a new Release section would be a good addition to the article, where you could put the information about 50 most-downloaded apps and the 1 million downloads. I'd probably remove the Popularity section and move most of that into the new Release section as well. Once all that is done, you should submit this for another, more in-depth review. Sorry, and good luck! —Torchiest ^talk_edits 13:40, 2 August 2012 (UTC)