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Nominator: Cukie Gherkin (talk · contribs) 23:14, 6 February 2026 (UTC)
Reviewer: Olliefant (talk · contribs) 16:33, 7 February 2026 (UTC)
@Olliefant: Responded to your comments - Cukie Gherkin (talk) 06:11, 11 February 2026 (UTC)
Lead
[edit]- "Writer Gita Jackson" name the outlet
- Fixed
- Kinda short, could it be expanded a bit?
- I added a bit about their comparison to other teams in the series
- Mention Lusamine is the primary villian of Sun and MOon
- Clarified (dropped the Aether Foundation mention)
- It states Plumeria is a leader, but elsewhere it describes Guzma as the sole leader
- Clarified
Concept and design
[edit]- "also aids Team Skull during the game" here it says he aids them but elsewhere it says he's a member
- Fixed
- I don't think "black-and-white" should be hypenated
- Fixed
- "similar station to his" I'm assuming this was meant to be "situation"?
- I think "similar station" is a less common phrase that basically means the same thing, like a colloquialism coming from "two people stationed in the same military outpost" or something. I switched the word
- Link "rivals" to List of Pokémon rivals
- Done
Appearances
[edit]- Link "Cosmog"
- Done
- "In the later versions of Sun and Moon titled Pokémon" -> "In the enhanced versions of Sun and Moon, titled Pokémon"
- Fixed
- "Team Skull appears in the first episode of the anime series Pokémon the Series: Sun & Moon" Sun & Moon is a season of the anime not a series in its own right
- Fixed
- Also what capacity do they appear in?
- Clarified
- "In a later episode, Team Rocket" I'm assuming this was intended to be "Team Skull"?
- Fixed
- "unleash Pokémon called Ultra Beasts" clarify that the Ultra Beasts are a type of pokemon, not a new name for them.
- Clarified
- Clarify the Rainbow Rocket stuff is post game content, not the main plot
- Done
Promotion and reception
[edit]- Link "MAGfest"
- Linked
- Link "native Hawaiians"
- Also I'm fairly certain "Native" should be capitalized
- Linked and capitalized
- "the website Tumblr" state what kind of website it is
- Clarified by calling it social media
- "the subject of "tons" of user-generated music videos made by the program MikuMikuDance to" -> "the subject of many user-generated music videos, using the program MikuMikuDance, to"
- Link "MikuMikuDance"
- Rewrote and linked
- "'70s punk rock" - > "1970s punk rock" per MOS:DECADE
- Fixed
- "
NealChandran stated" as he's already named before- Fixed (I sometimes get people nitpicking that I should reintroduce their website and full name so I get turned around all the time on this)
References
[edit]- Spot checks found nothing
- Dates are not consistently formatted
- Reformatted
- Linking is not consistent
- Fixed
- Ref 8 is missing the author
- Fixed
- Ref 21 has an issue with the author
- Fixed
- Refs 22 and 24 are improperly formatted
- Fixed
- Alot of Eurogamer sources have MOS:DASH errors in them
- Fixed