Talk:Tabubil

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I think a lot of this info is old or factually incorrect.... added the expert tag... need facts confirmed 203.206.185.148 20:01, 16 April 2006 (UTC) anon

• expert tag removed, this page is original work and the most concise factual article on Tabubil available on the Interweb at time of writing Alaisd 11:27, 6 May 2007 (UTC)
  • Appreciate what you're trying to do, Alaisd, but please read up on Wikipedia policy, specifically the simplified ruleset... in particular, no original research and verifiability. Wantok 01:15, 7 May 2007 (UTC)
    • This discussion has moved to my Talk Page
    • I removed the expert tag, as I had added it, and it was the wrong tag, the fact tag is more appropriate. Alaisd 04:47, 7 May 2007 (UTC)

Copy editing text

I've started copy editing the text of this article.  My edits are documented in "copy edits:" comments at the end of each parargarph edited. I've currently finished editing down to the "Mining town" section, and will be continuing my edits shortly. Most of my edits have been changing the logical order of phrases according to the "2-3-1" rule of phrase ordering in a sentence (lead off with second most important point of sentence, follow with least important point(s), end with most important (or significant) point.

One observation: There are no reference citations for points made in the "Min people" section. References need to be added there for the statements made.

I'll continue to copy edit this article, and will add my "League of Copy Editors" tag to the end of the article as soon as I find the tag again.K. Kellogg-Smith 01:53, 28 July 2007 (UTC)

Current state of the article

I believe with a few more references, this article will be at the stage of being promoted to GA class. 06:09, 5 August 2007 (UTC)