Talk:TEMPUS

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The three sentences "Tambov State Technical University's Centre for International Specialist Training (CIST) runs a specialist training course, "English for Students, Lecturers and Administrators of Technical Universities", developed within the framework of TEMPUS.[3] According to 2013 figures of the Minister of Education between 1993 and 2013 40% of Ukrainian higher education establishments have participated in TEMPUS projects.[1] In 2008, TEMPUS opened offices in both Jerusalem and Ramallah.[2]" are somewhat thrown together.

I'd prefer a more coherent synthesis, e.g. as a translation of the concize and very new Esperanto-article: "The program is arranged in intervals of seven years, whose experiences are reviewed before making adjustments to the program for the next interval. At the moment, the fourth program interval of 2007 to 2013 is taking place, and it's foreseen to have a following fifth interval of 2014 to 2020. In addition to offices in the EU Member States, the program according to the state of autumn 2013 has national offices in Albania, Algeria, Armenia, Azerbaijan, Belarus, Bosnia and Herzegovina, Egypt, Israel, Jordan, Georgia , Kazakhstan, Kosovo, Kyrgyzstan, Lebanon, Libya, Macedonia, Morocco, Moldova , Montenegro, Morocco, Palestine, Russian Federation, Serbia, Syria, Tajikistan, Tunisia, Turkmenistan, Ukraine and Uzbekistan."

The information about Tambov, Ukraine, Jerusalem and Ramallah could be used in a more coherent text, or just the sentence about the example of Ukraine could be cited as a single sentence after the initial text. Not being a native of English, I wouldn't put the rough translation out of Esperanto into the English text myself, but would ask for rewiev. --ThomasPusch (talk) 22:16, 14 October 2013 (UTC)