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Latest comment: 9 months ago by Lazman321 in topic GA review

Requested move 4 April 2016

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The result of the move request was: move as uncontroversial. Page history for the redirect shows that its previous usage had been related to this EP (non-admin closure). SSTflyer 12:17, 5 April 2016 (UTC)Reply



Swaay (EP)Swaay – Already redirects here and nothing else called Swaay Unreal7 (talk) 16:38, 4 April 2016 (UTC)Reply


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GA review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Swaay/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: Artmanha (talk · contribs) 06:38, 9 February 2025 (UTC)Reply

Reviewer: Lazman321 (talk · contribs) 00:51, 7 October 2025 (UTC)Reply


Good Article review progress box
Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

This will be my first review for the drive. Lazman321 (talk) 00:51, 7 October 2025 (UTC)Reply

1 - Well written

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1a - Clear and concise prose

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Fail - See verdict. Lazman321 (talk) 02:48, 7 October 2025 (UTC)Reply

1b - Adherence to the Manual of Style

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2 - Verifiable with no original research

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2a - Identifiable list of references

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List of references comply with relevant guidelines. Pass. Lazman321 (talk) 02:48, 7 October 2025 (UTC)Reply

2b - Reliable sources

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2c - No original research

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Conducting spotchecks here. Lazman321 (talk) 01:02, 7 October 2025 (UTC)Reply

Fail - See verdict. Lazman321 (talk) 02:48, 7 October 2025 (UTC)Reply
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Fail - See verdict. Lazman321 (talk) 02:48, 7 October 2025 (UTC)Reply

3 - Broad in its coverage

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3a - Main aspects

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3b - Focused

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4 - Neutral

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5 - Stable

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No ongoing edit war or content dispute. Pass Lazman321 (talk) 02:48, 7 October 2025 (UTC)Reply

6 - Illustrated by media

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The one piece of media, the cover art, has a valid fair-use rationale. Pass Lazman321 (talk) 02:48, 7 October 2025 (UTC)Reply

6b - Relevant media

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The one piece of media, the cover art, is patently relevant to the subject. Pass Lazman321 (talk) 02:48, 7 October 2025 (UTC)Reply

7 - Verdict

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I'm so sorry, but even though this has been in the backlog for so long, I'm going to have to quick-fail this review. Spot-checks identified issues regarding source-text integrity and plagiarism that are too extensive to address during a review. I also noticed writing issues throughout the article that are too extensive, often in the form of awkward and vague wording. Lazman321 (talk) 02:48, 7 October 2025 (UTC)Reply

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.