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Latest comment: 14 years ago by Gen. Quon in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Lemonade51 (talk · contribs) 21:48, 16 June 2012 (UTC)Reply

Lead

  • "In this episode, the fatal shooting of a realtor while alone in a cinderblock", place comma between 'realtor' and 'while'
  • "motive will yield more than method", reads like a TV Guide description, perhaps you could rephrase it for the audience?

Plot

  • Is it 'Mr. Chase', or 'Chase'? I'd say you go with the latter considering it is like that throughout the article.
  • Remove extra 'the' in "...if the the gunman was shooting from outside..."

Production

  • guest starred does not need to be hyphenated

Refs

  • 2000–2001 should be 2000–01, per WP:YEAR.

On hold. -- Lemonade51 (talk) 21:48, 16 June 2012 (UTC)Reply

I have addressed all our your concerns. Thank you for the review!--Gen. Quon (talk) 04:14, 17 June 2012 (UTC)Reply
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