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Latest comment: 10 years ago by Maproom in topic Some comments

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I have three suggestions for improving the article:

  • As a European reader, I had believed that sale of alcohol was heavily restricted throughout India. I have since learned that this is no longer so, at least in some provinces. Maybe the draft could briefly mention some change in legislation that made it feasible to set up a wine business in India?
  • The long "portfolio" section will be of very little interest to readers. It makes the draft look more like a publicity brochure than an encyclopedia article.
  • The picture showing 16 bottles of wine conveys nothing about Sula Vineyards - they look like any other bottles of wine. If you want to include a picture of the product, use one showing just one bottle, the right way up, so that readers can see the artwork on the label. Maproom (talk) 09:32, 21 January 2016 (UTC)Reply