Talk:Stuart Swezey
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Feedback from New Page Review process
[edit]I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: Hi, thanks for your work on the Stuart Swezey article — it's a compelling topic with clear cultural significance.
I've made a few edits:
- Rewrote the lead section to align better with Wikipedia’s manual of style.
- Replaced the custom infobox with the standard {{Infobox person}} for formatting consistency.
Here are a few suggestions to further improve the article:
- Add reliable sources: Some claims in the Biography and Career sections lack inline citations. Please consider adding references to help verify the content.
- Tone and neutrality: Phrases like "pushing the boundaries" and "self-described geek" could be rewritten in a more neutral, encyclopedic tone.
- Structure: A new section on Swezey's influence or legacy — particularly linking Desolation Center to festivals like Coachella or Burning Man — would provide valuable context, especially if supported by secondary sources.
Thanks again for your contributions! Let me know if you need help tracking sources or rewording sections.