Talk:Strabops

GA Review

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Reviewer: Dunkleosteus77 (talk · contribs) 18:16, 19 January 2019 (UTC)

Dunkleosteus77

• "with a lateral margin rounded anteriorly," did you just say the head is round?   User:Dunkleosteus77 |push to talk  18:16, 19 January 2019 (UTC)

Yes, changed to "rounded outline". Super Ψ Dro 19:02, 19 January 2019 (UTC)

• Does eurypterid start with an e sound or a y sound?   User:Dunkleosteus77 |push to talk  18:16, 19 January 2019 (UTC)

I am not the most suitable for pronunciations but I would say "y". I think I know what you mean and I have to say that I did not know this gramatical rule.

• What was the similarly-named Aglaspida subclass?   User:Dunkleosteus77 |push to talk  18:16, 19 January 2019 (UTC)

A clade that encompassed all the definitely aglaspidid genera, strabopids and other uncertain genera. Should I explain the included clades in the article?

No what was the name of the subclass?   User:Dunkleosteus77 |push to talk  20:12, 19 January 2019 (UTC)

Aglaspida, it is similarly named to Aglaspidida.

Oh I see, I just misread it   User:Dunkleosteus77 |push to talk  00:27, 21 January 2019 (UTC)

• You should probably say the Xiphosura are horseshoe crabs   User:Dunkleosteus77 |push to talk  18:16, 19 January 2019 (UTC)

Done.

• Why are some of the taxa in the cladogram bolded?   User:Dunkleosteus77 |push to talk  18:16, 19 January 2019 (UTC)

They represent the major chelicerate groups. Now this is stated in the article.

You should probably put that in the caption of the cladogram ("Bolded taxa are...")   User:Dunkleosteus77 |push to talk  20:12, 19 January 2019 (UTC)

You mean this?

Sorry, I was looking below the cladogram   User:Dunkleosteus77 |push to talk  00:27, 21 January 2019 (UTC)

• In the taxobox you specify only the type species T. thacheri implying there are more, but since there's only one species, you want to use {{speciesbox}}. But that's a really minor thing, so I'll go ahead and pass   User:Dunkleosteus77 |push to talk  00:27, 21 January 2019 (UTC)

Done.

• And tiny grammar thing, in the future, "further" is a synonym of "also," and "farther" is a measure of distance (for example, "...And further, I think you can throw the ball farther")   User:Dunkleosteus77 |push to talk  00:27, 21 January 2019 (UTC)

Thanks for the review! I'll take that into consideration. Super Ψ Dro 23:47, 21 January 2019 (UTC)