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Latest comment: 12 years ago by Hollyferet

This article has been automatically assessed as Stub-Class because it uses the [[Category:New Jersey stub]] on the article page.

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1.) You do not have a reference after each individual sentence. However, you do have a citation at the end of each paragraph in your edit, which is exactly what I did with mine. I assume that everything within that paragraph came from the source listed at the end of it.

2.) The language throughout your edit is definitely neutral. It is well-written throughout and filled with facts about your subject matter.

3.) I found no statements that were opinionated in any way when reading your edit. Everything seemed to be factual and directly from the sources you listed.

Good Job Alexander on your edits! However, it looks like you made some edits for three different Wikipedia pages. For this assignment, we were supposed to have picked one page and make a 300 word edit with 6 references. Maybe you can pick one of your choices and just expand it into further detail once you find a few more sources. Hollyferet (talk) 21:41, 22 April 2014 (UTC)Reply

If anyone can update the article with a picture of the reservoir, perhaps add some pictures of the park as well. I do not have the ability to do so myself. Thank you. NJ_Collegestudent 23:15, 23 April 2014 (UTC)  Preceding unsigned comment added by NJ Collegestudent (talkcontribs)