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Name of village
[edit]Currently the article starts with the words, "In an unnamed village", which suggests that the town Miryam is from has no name. Page 6, Para. 2, S. 2-3 "Our town was unwalled and half nameless; some people said it was called Pakel, for being near the road, and those who didn't like that, because it reminded them of being near the Staryk road, would shout them down and say it was called Pavys, for being near the river, but no one bothered to put it on a map, so no decision was ever made. When we spoke, we all only called it town." Suggest the article start with "In an unwalled town", which feels more correct without getting overly verbose. Vollink (talk) 23:16, 26 February 2019 (UTC)
- Honestly, it doesn't matter. "In a small town in the kingdom of Lithvas" will do. In fact, this 9-paragraph plot summary is about 8 paragraphs too long. DS (talk) 20:50, 13 July 2019 (UTC)