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Latest comment: 15 years ago by PrincessofLlyr in topic Assessment comments

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You've definitely started some good work. The most important thing to me is that you need a section on criticism, general reviews, etc. A description of what the critics are saying about her, both good and bad. Some of the writing could be tweaked, for instance, the first few sentences of the "author" section need a more encyclopedic tone. Something else to consider is possibly using her last name to refer through the article instead of her first (see Emily Dickinson for example). That should be a good start to work on for now. With a critical reception section it could easily become a C-class. PrincessofLlyr royal court 17:03, 3 January 2011 (UTC)Reply