Talk:Sigma (Overwatch)/GA1

GA review

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Nominator: Kung Fu Man (talk · contribs) 23:39, 31 March 2026 (UTC)

Reviewer: LunaEatsTuna (talk · contribs) 23:04, 10 April 2026 (UTC)

Erm, what the sigma?! Anyhow, I will review this within a week or two. :) ❧ LunaEatsTuna (talk), proudly editing since 2018 (and just editing since 2017) – posted at 23:04, 10 April 2026 (UTC)

Copyvio check

No copyright concerns at all; all quotations are short excerpts, justifiably relevant and attributed.

Lead

• "various media outlets and groups" – you could do "various media outlets and mental health advocacy groups" to be it more clear.

Conception and development

• Wikilink Overwatch and Blizzard, as this is their first mention outside of the lead section (things are linked once in the lead, the once in the body of the article).
• "In additional they" – should be "in addition they".
• "However when" – change to "However, when".
• "another scientist associated organization" – should be "the organization".
• "being mindful though to make" – I would do "being mindful to make".
• "Sigma was originally envisioned a" – should be "Sigma was originally envisioned as a"

Design

• "roughly 8 ft tall" – add {{convert|8|ft|cm}}, a handy template that converts imperial units to metric and vice-versa.
• "connect the various pieces of wire" – state where the wires are.
• Wikilink Overwatch 2.
• "though caused concerns" – should be "although this caused concerns". Also:
• Remove the first visually of this sentence, to avoid the redundancy with its second mention.

Appearances

• "Michael Chu stated that not the case" – change to "Michael Chu stated this is that not the case".
• "and instead Sigma was focused on the accident and left him" – I think should be "and that Sigma was instead focused on the accident that left him".
• "decision making" – should be "decision-making".
• "With Overwatch 2, after character Vendetta" – I would do "In Overwatch 2, after the character Vendetta".

Gameplay

• "Tank-class" – I think should be "tank-class".
• Remove "in team compositions".
• "In additional to his weapon" – change to "In addition to this weapon". Also:
• Looking at the citation, is this "Experimental Barrier" only in Overwatch 2 or in both games? You should specify if it is only in the second one.

Promotion and reception

• "animation as verging Lovecraftian" – I would do "animation as nearly Lovecraftian".
• Does the source what type of doctors Raffael Boccamazzo and Rachel Kowert are?
• "omitted from the character without impacting the character" – change to "omitted from Sigma without impacting the character" to avoid the redundancy.
• "Noting that the game" – I would do "Noting that while the game".

Spotcheck

Passes on the refs I checked.

Thanks for the fun read! I will now place this article on hold to allow for you to make any improvements. Please ping me once you are finished so that I can know when to take another look. But also, feel free to ask any questions or refute any of my proposed changes. All the best, ❧ LunaEatsTuna (talk), proudly editing since 2018 (and just editing since 2017) – posted at 05:38, 20 April 2026 (UTC)

@LunaEatsTuna: I went through and fixed everything, added a second ref to Experimental Barrier to confirm it was in OW1 as well. Tank I left as is, as the game does treat it as a proper noun. As for the doctors, they are Doctors of Psychology, but the source itself doesn't specifically state that. Still I've had instances where I've cited a scholarly paper for example and the person's professorship wasn't explicit in that source, so hoping this still works. Let me know if there's anything else to fix!--Kung Fu Man (talk) 11:11, 20 April 2026 (UTC)

Great work on the changes! Yes, I think everything looks solid to me now. I am happy to pass this article for GA status. Congrats! ❧ LunaEatsTuna (talk), proudly editing since 2018 (and just editing since 2017) – posted at 05:16, 24 April 2026 (UTC)

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.