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Latest comment: 1 year ago by Ssilvers in topic Ferber and her novel Show Boat
Former good articleShow Boat was one of the Media and drama good articles, but it has been removed from the list. There are suggestions below for improving the article to meet the good article criteria. Once these issues have been addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake.
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DateProcessResult
November 27, 2012Good article nomineeListed
November 5, 2024Good article reassessmentDelisted
On this day...A fact from this article was featured on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "On this day..." column on December 27, 2011.
Current status: Delisted good article

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I am concerned that this article does not meet the good article criteria anymore. Some of my concerns are listed below:

  • There is uncited text throughout the article, and an orange "more citations needed" since 2015.
  • The "Analysis" relies on block quotes, and should instead summarise the information in prose.
  • The article uses citations from IMDB, and the Amazon citations should be evaluated for its inclusion.

Is anyone interested in addressing these concerns, or should this article go to WP:GAR? Z1720 (talk) 01:15, 5 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

GA Reassessment

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The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.


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Result: Delisted. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 17:26, 5 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

There is uncited text throughout the article, and an orange "more citations needed" since 2015. The "Analysis" relies on block quotes, and should instead summarise the information in prose. The article uses citations from IMDB, and the Amazon citations should be evaluated for its inclusion. Z1720 (talk) 21:16, 28 October 2024 (UTC)Reply

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

Ferber and her novel Show Boat

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@Ssilvers I have now completed writing this sub-section. I incorporated the facts that were previously copyright infringed but in new language and with a lot of new material so that the article is no longer plagiarizing. I still have to address the copyright violation material in the adapting the novel section which I am moving on to next after I do some more research/reading. I would appreciate any copy editing or feedback on the "Ferber and her novel Show Boat" sub-section. Best.4meter4 (talk) 18:16, 8 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

I gave it a once-through, but it is still too long, because this is the article about the musical, not the book. All of this is good stuff but needs to be summarized more in this article -- though, by all means, add it to Show Boat (novel). I'd say that it should still be cut by, ideally 40%. If you want me to try to make the painful cuts, let me know. -- Ssilvers (talk) 20:11, 8 November 2024 (UTC)Reply
@Ssilvers Agreed, let me finish writing the adapting the novel section. Once that is written, I think we'll have a better overall view to help make trimming decisions. You have a better critical eye for cuts than I do. It's one your strengths as an editor, so I'll leave it to you to decide what we should keep and what should be thrown out. Best.4meter4 (talk) 20:21, 8 November 2024 (UTC)Reply
Just for fun, if you have never seen the movie, here is the great Kathryn Grayson singing "Make Believe" and "You Are Love" with Howard Keel. Her vocal style (and that of Magnolia in the musical) is not much influenced by black music as Ferber intended, but they don't make 'em like this anymore. -- Ssilvers (talk) 20:32, 8 November 2024 (UTC)Reply
Ssilvers Yes, I actually watched the Grayson and Keel movie for the first time the night before you posted to the musical theatre wikiproject page. It was odd timing, as if the fates knew I was about to start editing this page. lol Grayson's vibrato kind of annoys me, but somehow Keel's voice blends nicely with hers and I enjoy her voice when she sings with him, just not by herself. Interestingly, several of the books I am reading say the Show Boat (1951 film) is the weakest of the film adaptations. All of them go out of their way to praise the Show Boat (1929 film) as the best. Here are few interesting clips of Hattie McDaniel with Robson and Helen Morgan from the Show Boat (1936 film) Ah Still Suits Me" and Can't Help Lovin' Dat Man. I would be interested in catching these older films which both got better reception in the books.4meter4 (talk) 20:48, 8 November 2024 (UTC)Reply
Those are great clips. -- Ssilvers (talk) 21:35, 8 November 2024 (UTC)Reply
I thought so. You can tell the actors have lived with these characters for a while on stage prior to filming it. There's just something so appealing about their performances that I think is hard to replicate for film actors new to their parts.4meter4 (talk) 22:03, 8 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

@Ssilvers I finished taking care of the copyright issues in the background section. You can go ahead and start making cuts. Is this enough content on the adaptation? So much has been written on all the various changes and cuts during tryouts, I could add much more. Should I get into where it played during the tryout performances and all the alterations, or is this sort of general background enough?4meter4 (talk) 19:47, 11 November 2024 (UTC)Reply

We could mention a couple of the really major cuts and changes. Depending on how many tryouts there were -- if there were only a couple, let's name them, or if there were a lot, we can give a general idea of the trajectory -- we should give the basic timeline, however. -- Ssilvers (talk) 04:38, 12 November 2024 (UTC)Reply
According to Dietz, there were four tryout runs. I'll try and come up with a brief overview tomorrow.4meter4 (talk) 04:54, 12 November 2024 (UTC)Reply
Good I did a little more trimming. I still think the first part is too long, but I am not inspired right now as to what is still cuttable. I'll ponder and come back to it later. -- Ssilvers (talk) 05:25, 12 November 2024 (UTC)Reply