Talk:Send In Stewie, Please

GA review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Send in Stewie, Please/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: Black midi skirt (talk · contribs) 16:58, 25 June 2026 (UTC)

Reviewer: Crystal Drawers (talk · contribs) 00:16, 29 June 2026 (UTC)

Will put up my comments soon, but ping me if I haven’t by Friday. I actually just watched this episode last week, can’t say I’m a fan lol Crystal Drawers 🎖️ ^{(wanna talk?)} 00:16, 29 June 2026 (UTC)

Looking forward to it! Just note that I didn't change the plot from before I started, but I'm willing to rephrase and trim it down if needed. Black midi skirt (talk) 00:37, 29 June 2026 (UTC)

@Black midi skirt: Apologies for the lateness, my prose comments are up, and I’ll do a source spot check once they are addressed Crystal Drawers 🎖️ ^{(wanna talk?)} 19:54, 5 July 2026 (UTC)

Lead

• "including his sexuality, loneliness, alienation from others, as well as his fabricated British accent." — "As well as" should be "and"

• Could be expanded more, perhaps on the episode's production

Plot

• At 500 words, the plot is well over the 400 word maximum, it should be condensed greatly to remove any fluff that isn’t needed. Since it needs to be greatly shortened, I’m going to review the section’s prose after it has been rewritten, please ping me when you’ve done so :)

Production

• The section should start with "[Episode title] was written by [name] and directed by [name]", as do most episode GAs

• I feel there’s some quotes that could easily be converted to prose

• I recommend taking the last paragraph and adding it to the start of Reception, which you can rename to Release and reception, as this doesn’t have anything to do with the episode’s production

Reception

• Add info on how the episode did in Nielson ratings compared to the previous episode

• You don’t need to put the ' after The Simpsons

• There is a lot of paraphrasing here that I feel could get cut down. Also, I ask that you try to expand the reviews a bit, most are one sentence when the articles definitely allow for more to be written

Stewie's homosexuality

• This goes way too off topic, the first paragraph is completely unneeded, past remarks don’t matter and I only see a case for one small quote being used for Background information

• My advice is to take the second paragraph and just add it to Production, it fits better there

GA review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Send in Stewie, Please/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: Black midi skirt (talk · contribs) 16:58, 25 June 2026 (UTC)

Reviewer: Crystal Drawers (talk · contribs) 00:16, 29 June 2026 (UTC)

Will put up my comments soon, but ping me if I haven’t by Friday. I actually just watched this episode last week, can’t say I’m a fan lol Crystal Drawers 🎖️ ^{(wanna talk?)} 00:16, 29 June 2026 (UTC)

Looking forward to it! Just note that I didn't change the plot from before I started, but I'm willing to rephrase and trim it down if needed. Black midi skirt (talk) 00:37, 29 June 2026 (UTC)

@Black midi skirt: Apologies for the lateness, my prose comments are up, and I’ll do a source spot check once they are addressed Crystal Drawers 🎖️ ^{(wanna talk?)} 19:54, 5 July 2026 (UTC)

Lead

• "including his sexuality, loneliness, alienation from others, as well as his fabricated British accent." — "As well as" should be "and"

• Could be expanded more, perhaps on the episode's production

Plot

• At 500 words, the plot is well over the 400 word maximum, it should be condensed greatly to remove any fluff that isn’t needed. Since it needs to be greatly shortened, I’m going to review the section’s prose after it has been rewritten, please ping me when you’ve done so :)

Production

• The section should start with "[Episode title] was written by [name] and directed by [name]", as do most episode GAs

• I feel there’s some quotes that could easily be converted to prose

• I recommend taking the last paragraph and adding it to the start of Reception, which you can rename to Release and reception, as this doesn’t have anything to do with the episode’s production

Reception

• Add info on how the episode did in Nielson ratings compared to the previous episode

• You don’t need to put the ' after The Simpsons

• There is a lot of paraphrasing here that I feel could get cut down. Also, I ask that you try to expand the reviews a bit, most are one sentence when the articles definitely allow for more to be written

Stewie's homosexuality

• This goes way too off topic, the first paragraph is completely unneeded, past remarks don’t matter and I only see a case for one small quote being used for Background information

• My advice is to take the second paragraph and just add it to Production, it fits better there