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Latest comment: 17 years ago by Fences and windows in topic Sources

Wrong tone?

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What's wrong with tone? Who are you/what are your concerns? Chris R —Preceding unsigned comment added by CRoetzer (talkcontribs)

The tone is wrong because the article is written more like a writeup in a pop magazine rather than an encyclopedia. Wikipedia has a Manual of style that dictates how articles should be written, and this article just misses the bar. As for me, I'm just another WikiPedian who is trying to help the project. WikiDan61ChatMe!ReadMe!! 21:49, 12 May 2009 (UTC)Reply
Pop magazine? I think it's simply explaining technical securities industry topic in plain English. I'll re-read MOS ref. and see if I'd change anything... thx

Chris R —Preceding unsigned comment added by CRoetzer (talkcontribs) 22:25, 12 May 2009 (UTC)Reply

Sources

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Some more sources:. Primer here, first is in a newspaper, same article on a website, and lastly a spoken word version:. Fences and windows (talk) 03:54, 13 May 2009 (UTC)Reply