Edge Rewrite
// HTMLRewriter · presentation

This page was redesigned at the edge.

Cloudflare fetched the original article and streamed it through HTMLRewriter to apply an entirely new visual system without rebuilding the source page.

// request.cf · coarse context

A page that knows where it met you.

Only coarse request metadata is shown. This demo does not display or persist visitor IP addresses.

Country
US
Cloudflare location
CMH
Connection
HTTP/2
Language
Not provided

Ray ID: a260f72459ecd96e

Jump to content

Talk:Second Layer

Page contents not supported in other languages.
Add topic
From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
Latest comment: 11 months ago by Bassaxist in topic Please replace article

Please replace article

[edit]

Please replace the current article with the draft here: User:Bassaxist/sandbox2.

Rewriting article with fully sourced, corrected version. Previous version is missing pertinent and valuable information and contained multiple factual errors and lacked reliable citations. I am one of the members of Second Layer

Thank You Bassaxist (talk) 13:36, 18 August 2025 (UTC)Reply

Not done: A majority of the requested changes are currently written in a promotional tone. Please review WP:Neutral point of view and ensure you follow this before submitting any edit requests. AlphaBetaGamma (Talk/report any mistakes here) 16:05, 21 August 2025 (UTC)Reply
Thank you for the reply. Would you kindly provide some guidance on what you see as promotional tone? I have read and re-read, along with also paying attention to Wikipedia Neutral point of view. What I have provided is all factual, with citations to reliable sources.
There is no intent to promote, and I am not seeing it at all.
You say the majority, so is that my writing "style" in and of itself?
Or is it the sources cited?
For me to correct I really need, at least, some examples.
The current article is obviously written by persons without any first hand knowledge of Second Layer Bassaxist (talk) 17:06, 21 August 2025 (UTC)Reply