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Latest comment: 11 months ago by Bassaxist in topic Please replace article
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Please replace article
[edit]| This edit request by an editor with a conflict of interest was declined. Some or all of the changes may be promotional in tone. |
Please replace the current article with the draft here: User:Bassaxist/sandbox2.
Rewriting article with fully sourced, corrected version. Previous version is missing pertinent and valuable information and contained multiple factual errors and lacked reliable citations. I am one of the members of Second Layer
Thank You Bassaxist (talk) 13:36, 18 August 2025 (UTC)
Not done: A majority of the requested changes are currently written in a promotional tone. Please review WP:Neutral point of view and ensure you follow this before submitting any edit requests. AlphaBetaGamma (Talk/report any mistakes here) 16:05, 21 August 2025 (UTC)
- Thank you for the reply. Would you kindly provide some guidance on what you see as promotional tone? I have read and re-read, along with also paying attention to Wikipedia Neutral point of view. What I have provided is all factual, with citations to reliable sources.
- There is no intent to promote, and I am not seeing it at all.
- You say the majority, so is that my writing "style" in and of itself?
- Or is it the sources cited?
- For me to correct I really need, at least, some examples.
- The current article is obviously written by persons without any first hand knowledge of Second Layer Bassaxist (talk) 17:06, 21 August 2025 (UTC)
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