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Latest comment: 7 years ago by Mjt74 in topic Makenzie Towery Peer Review

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The sections that you have delineated so far are clear and will allow you to write a well-balanced article on your assigned archaeologist.

The formatting looks very clean and professional. How did you get the underline under each of your section titles? I am still learning.

You are writing in a neutral tone which is appropriate for this assignment.

Rmb97 (talk) 01:22, 1 February 2019 (UTC)Reply

Makenzie Towery Peer Review

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So far, you seem to have a pretty good set up with the headings. You should add a reference heading for when you start citing information.

Your lead is good, very clean and simple to read. Your current information reads fairly neutral. I think once you add more information your article will be great!

Mjt74 (talk) 04:18, 2 February 2019 (UTC)Reply