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Latest comment: 5 months ago by Zzz plant in topic GA review

Did you know nomination

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Bunnypranav talk 14:30, 2 February 2025 (UTC)Reply

Created by JJonahJackalope (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 61 past nominations.

JJonahJackalope (talk) 15:11, 8 January 2025 (UTC).Reply

  • Article is new enough, well sourced, seems neutral, Earwig shows 30% but no copyvio, hook verifies (using Google Books). Good to go on ALT1, which I consider the most interesting. Great work! Departure– (talk) 16:35, 31 January 2025 (UTC)Reply

GA review

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The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.


This review is transcluded from Talk:Sanity Code/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Nominator: JJonahJackalope (talk · contribs) 19:45, 30 May 2025 (UTC)Reply

Reviewer: Zzz plant (talk · contribs) 12:49, 1 February 2026 (UTC)Reply

Hi JJonahJackalope, thanks for your work on this article. I'll review it- should have comments posted within the next day. Best, Zzz plant (talk) 12:49, 1 February 2026 (UTC)Reply

Good Article review progress box
Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

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  • the prose is generally strong and engaging. I do want to flag off the top- I feel like I usually see "it" for organizations like the NCAA rather than "they", but I need to track down the exact MOS guidance Zzz plant (talk) 14:43, 1 February 2026 (UTC)Reply
Let me know if you can find anything in the style guide that suggests either "it" or "they" and I'll make changes accordingly. At the very least, I want to make sure that only one term is used consistently throughout the article. -JJonahJackalope (talk) 01:30, 11 February 2026 (UTC)Reply

Lede

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Removed the word "formally" from the first sentence of the article, as recommended. -JJonahJackalope (talk) 01:30, 11 February 2026 (UTC)Reply
  • generally, the lede does a good job of providing an overview of info to expect in the body, but I think the first paragraph could be stronger - it sort of briefly touches on history "revoked in 1951" but then promptly backtracks to 1906 for the full story. I think the first para should either provide a more general overview of the history in the context of its importance or leave it all for the second paragraph. Zzz plant (talk) 21:33, 1 February 2026 (UTC)Reply
I have edited the first paragraph to leave more of the information in the second paragraph, per your second suggestion here. -JJonahJackalope (talk) 01:30, 11 February 2026 (UTC)Reply
  • "Since the NCAA's founding in 1906, they have specified that college sports should be purely amateur but left regulation and enforcement of this to its member institutions." this sentence is doing a lot, I would recommend splitting (+ replacing "they" with "it") into something like "Since the NCAA's founding in 1906, it has specified that college sports should be purely amateur. Regulation and enforcement, however, were left to its member institutions. Zzz plant (talk) 14:43, 1 February 2026 (UTC)Reply
Replaced this sentence with the one recommended above. -JJonahJackalope (talk) 01:30, 11 February 2026 (UTC)Reply
  • "In the Southern United States..." it wasn't just the southern US though, right? Villanova + BC also participated. Maybe qualify this. Or just delete, since you already say "primarily in the South" later on Zzz plant (talk) 21:33, 1 February 2026 (UTC)Reply
Removed the first part of the sentence, per your suggestion. -JJonahJackalope (talk) 01:30, 11 February 2026 (UTC)Reply
I felt that the link to the article on Cartelization was sufficient, as I also felt that the word was a bit uncommon and could use some additional information. If you have any suggestions on rephrasing the sentence, however, I would definitely be open to discussing changes. -JJonahJackalope (talk) 01:30, 11 February 2026 (UTC)Reply
Rephrased the last paragraph to remove several of the uses of the word "first", per your suggestion above. -JJonahJackalope (talk) 01:30, 11 February 2026 (UTC)Reply

Background

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Rephrased the first sentence of the first paragraph per your suggesion above. -JJonahJackalope (talk) 01:30, 11 February 2026 (UTC)Reply
  • "In 1916, they defined an amateur as "one who participates in competitive physical sports only for the pleasure, and the physical, mental, moral and social benefits derived therefrom" - I would swap the order slightly so that the year is de-emphasized (i.e. not first), bc that's not really the key piece of information here, the salient point is how they defined amateur sports (and that it was relatively soon after the bylaws were established) Zzz plant (talk) 21:33, 1 February 2026 (UTC)Reply
Rephrased this sentence per your suggestion above. -JJonahJackalope (talk) 01:30, 11 February 2026 (UTC)Reply
  • "Additionally, the NCAA left enforcement of its amateurism rule up to its member universities, leading to widespread rules violations throughout the first half of the 20th century." up until this point, as a non-expert, it wasn't really clear to me that there were actual rules to be violated, or at least rules defined enough that someone could violate them. Zzz plant (talk) 14:43, 1 February 2026 (UTC)Reply
Rephrased this sentence slightly. -JJonahJackalope (talk) 01:30, 11 February 2026 (UTC)Reply
  • "In terms of a standard approach to the issue of financial compensation for athletes, universities and conferences differed on proposed reforms." - I would condense this, it seems a little verbose for a pretty simple point. something like "Universities and conferences disagreed on a standard approach to athlete compensation." Zzz plant (talk) 22:01, 1 February 2026 (UTC)Reply
Replaced the sentence with your recommended rephrasing. -JJonahJackalope (talk) 01:30, 11 February 2026 (UTC)Reply
  • the sentence starting with "Conferences in the Southern United States, such as the Missouri Valley Conference..." that lists out all the conferences that were in favor and then those opposed should be split Zzz plant (talk) 21:33, 1 February 2026 (UTC)Reply
Split this sentence into two sentences, per your suggestion. -JJonahJackalope (talk) 01:30, 11 February 2026 (UTC)Reply

The Sanity Code

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Changed sentence per your suggestion. -JJonahJackalope (talk) 01:30, 11 February 2026 (UTC)Reply
Rephrased this section. -JJonahJackalope (talk) 01:30, 11 February 2026 (UTC)Reply
  • "Despite the opposition, the Sanity Code was approved almost unanimously at the 1948 general convention..." do we know why this happened? as a reader I'm curious why it passed by such a wide margin given the aforementioned opposition Zzz plant (talk) 14:43, 1 February 2026 (UTC)Reply
Unfortunately, I was not able to find information from the sources that would have given more context for why this happened. -JJonahJackalope (talk) 01:30, 11 February 2026 (UTC)Reply
  • "The University of Virginia openly called the code unenforceable..." I think this should probably be attributed to a person or department within the university, rather than the institution stating it as a whole Zzz plant (talk) 14:43, 1 February 2026 (UTC)Reply
The source that that information is attributed to (Lapchick & Slaughter 1989, p. 9) reads as follows: "The University of Virginia went so far as to reject the code openly, declaring it unenforceable." Unfortunately, the source does not give a more specific group or individual to cite this to. Let me know how you would suggest approaching this. -JJonahJackalope (talk) 01:30, 11 February 2026 (UTC)Reply
Thanks for clarifying - in that case I think it's fine as-is, as a fair reflection of what the source says. Trying to attribute it to an official (even unnamed) without the source being specific could drift into OR. Zzz plant (talk) 01:47, 11 February 2026 (UTC)Reply
Which "the"s? The ones before "Sinful Seven" and "Seven Sinners" or the ones preceding the names of the institutions? -JJonahJackalope (talk) 01:30, 11 February 2026 (UTC)Reply
I meant the ones before the institution names, like "These institutions, nicknamed the “Sinful Seven” or the "Seven Sinners", were: Villanova University, Boston College, The Citadel, University of Maryland, University of Virginia, Virginia Military Institute, and Virginia Polytechnic Institute." but honestly this is a very minor, non-blocking note- no worries if you want to keep them. Zzz plant (talk) 01:45, 11 February 2026 (UTC)Reply

Aftermath and legacy

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  • "and an honor code violation involving members of the 1951 Army Cadets football team." I get the first wikilink is to a specific section, but it still feels a bit odd to have two wls in a row that lead to the same destination page Zzz plant (talk) 14:43, 1 February 2026 (UTC)Reply
Removed the initial wikilink from this sentence. -JJonahJackalope (talk) 01:30, 11 February 2026 (UTC)Reply
Removed "of his" per your suggestion. -JJonahJackalope (talk) 01:30, 11 February 2026 (UTC)Reply
  • "That same year, the Sanity Code with a Committee on Infractions that had broad authority to levy sanctions against institutions that are found to be not in good standing." - I think this is missing a verb Zzz plant (talk) 14:43, 1 February 2026 (UTC)Reply
Added "was replaced" after "Code". -JJonahJackalope (talk) 01:30, 11 February 2026 (UTC)Reply
Rephrased this section. -JJonahJackalope (talk) 01:30, 11 February 2026 (UTC)Reply
Rephrased the first sentence in the third paragraph. -JJonahJackalope (talk) 01:30, 11 February 2026 (UTC)Reply
Changed "say" to "said". -JJonahJackalope (talk) 01:30, 11 February 2026 (UTC)Reply

Sourcing

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Formatting

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I must have added that book to the Sources section with the expectation that it would be used, but I have moved it to the Further reading section. -JJonahJackalope (talk) 01:30, 11 February 2026 (UTC)Reply

Reliability

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Spot check

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in line ref #s as of this revision

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Scope

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  • provides a thorough overview of the rules, including background and later implications. nothing seems to be missing and there are no detours of excessive detail. article size (2718 words) is reasonable, not approaching any split/spin-out benchmarks per size rule. Zzz plant (talk) 14:10, 1 February 2026 (UTC)Reply

Stability

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Illustration

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Done. -JJonahJackalope (talk) 01:30, 11 February 2026 (UTC)Reply
I was looking for something like this to add, but unfortunately could not find an image of the code itself, though there maybe a newspaper article or headline in the public domain that could be used. I will definitely add an image to the top of the article if an appropriate one is found. -JJonahJackalope (talk) 01:30, 11 February 2026 (UTC)Reply

@Zzz plant:, just wanted to reach out to let you know that I have made some edits to this article to address the points you raised in your review. Apologies for the delay, but thanks for reviewing this article, and if you have any further questions, comments, or concerns, please reach out. Regards, -JJonahJackalope (talk) 01:30, 11 February 2026 (UTC)Reply

No worries, thank you for the detailed responses! I've reviewed your edits and replies; everything has been addressed. I'm confident the article meets the GA criteria so I'll promote this shortly. Excellent work on the article- it's so nice to have a sea of green checks on source spot check! Zzz plant (talk) 01:51, 11 February 2026 (UTC)Reply
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.