Talk:Sanders Draper School

Style, pov, repetition, no sources, no links, advertising, terrible

The entire entry reads like a very unprofessional piece of advertising, for the school, for individual teachers, for the company that runs it. It is very strange, even for a wikipedia entry, with many references not linked to or explained to for those - i.e. anyone not from the local area and/or intimately interested in or involved with the school - who will not understand them.

"In September 2018 Mr Brooks took over as Headteacher and the school joined Success For All Educational Trust (SFAET) and so worked in partnership with Redden Court and Royal Liberty."

Who is Mr Brooks? Does he have a forename? What is the educational trust? What is Redden Court and Royal Liberty? Is any of this relevant to anything?

"The school reverted to its historic name of Sanders Draper in September 2021, this followed the drive for this from Headteacher Mr Brooks and Success For All Educational Trust. The school is very keen to celebrate its history and has implemented a house system based on celebrating Havering heroes and the local community have voted on which of the 13 heroes will become the 5 house names."

Again, again, again. Was this page written as part of a year 7 project?

"The school reverted to its rightful name of Sanders Draper in September 2021 following the drive for this from the Headteacher Stuart Brooks, SFAET. There was full support from the local community and ex students for this change which is part of the introduction of a new House system which celebrates Havering heroes and the school's rich history."

Repeats the dross from above. "Rightful name"??? "full support", aha, 100%?

If I could rewrite this page, I would. But it needs deleting and starting again from scratch. Maybe someone with the knowledge can do this? ~2026-34074-87 (talk) 01:04, 9 June 2026 (UTC)